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When Death Knocks
By Gray Vision
Frustration,
Swelling,
Burning within
me
This gut wrenching,
Gut twisting feeling
Burning,
Devouring
Like acid upon naked
skin,
The feeling,
This unexplainable feeling
Is it anger?
Hatred
Is it anxiety?
Animosity
This unshakeable feeling,
This
uneasy feeling
Will it ever leave me?
Decomposing,
Rotting,
Decaying,
Its death
I
can feel it,
I can feel it in my bones
Someone
just died,
Someone
Close to me.
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Copyright 2010 Gray Vision
Author's Note:
Here is my attempt to explain the feeling(s) one encounters when someone has passed, before coming to know who or how it happened, enjoy.Comments on "When Death Knocks"
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On Friday, July 16, 2010, Riven Waker
(323)
wrote:
a hauntingly bleak piece - at once a fascinating journey through the mind
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On Friday, June 4, 2010, lupus tenebrae
(872) wrote:
That was a great write, I used to get this kind of feeling a lot, and unfortunately I was right about it, well done, described that sense perfectly.
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