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"My new favorite! Wonderful job."
Posted by Velvet_Raventon on "with black on gray" by Six-Out

"Come visit us, we'll make you happy again :)"
Posted by Velvet_Raventon on "there are worse things than being alone." by Six-Out

"I second that! *hugs*"
Posted by Velvet_Raventon on "neoprene." by Six-Out

"I thought I'd comment again, because this is so beautiful. ~V."
Posted by Velvet_Raventon on "hopelessly.poetic." by Six-Out

"You need a holiday with (good) friends, and no one you don't know around. So you can't concentrate on them, and you can concentrate on you instead and relax, have a little fun, and heal your wounds. *hugs*"
Posted by Velvet_Raventon on "smoking poetry paper like cheap cigars." by Six-Out

"*looks for a nice job and nice girls in IA*"
Posted by Velvet_Raventon on "something like glass hammers." by Six-Out

"Not that other people don't, but you get what I am saying: this poem rocks!"
Posted by Velvet_Raventon on "hide and sink. [like glass splinters]" by Six-Out

"Except for Six Out cause he writes awesome poetry :)"
Posted by Velvet_Raventon on "hide and sink. [like glass splinters]" by Six-Out

":("
Posted by Velvet_Raventon on "key.note speakers [on mute]" by Six-Out

"Wow... Speechless... ~V."
Posted by Velvet_Raventon on "she spoke pearl" by Six-Out

"He looks like he wants to make out with you :D ~V."
Posted by Velvet_Raventon on "Sage Francis and I" by Six-Out

"I remember this *hugs*"
Posted by Velvet_Raventon on "every line [goodbye&goodnight]" by Six-Out

"Your poems are like whirlpools of colors... ~V."
Posted by Velvet_Raventon on "she spoke emerald" by Six-Out

"Smells like autumn. ~V."
Posted by Velvet_Raventon on "she spoke sepia." by Six-Out

"Oh yes you are. That was so delicately beautiful. ~V."
Posted by Velvet_Raventon on "hopelessly.poetic." by Six-Out

"That's too much! *laughs* ~V."
Posted by Velvet_Raventon on "Chicago: The Ugly Truth" by Six-Out

"You lost, you're beautiful ;) Seriously, this was amazing... I loved the images, I loved the words, and the pauses were in the right places. Great job, ~V."
Posted by Velvet_Raventon on "oil to flame [and star studded ashes]" by Six-Out

"WHY YOU LITTLE..!! Don't you dare not post again and say you don't write nice things!! ~V."
Posted by Velvet_Raventon on "myths need mystery [we're all liars]" by Six-Out

"Talking about breathing, this left me breathless. Great work, wonderfully expressed emotions! ~V."
Posted by Velvet_Raventon on "blink-breathe-repeat" by Six-Out

"Wonderful... ~V."
Posted by Velvet_Raventon on "frayed edges [looking for a lighter]" by Six-Out

"wow, yes, that's a great way to describe the feeling... but it's also so much more... Wonderful work, ~V."
Posted by Velvet_Raventon on "azariel- [larmes de ciel]" by Six-Out

"You're great =) ~V."
Posted by Velvet_Raventon on "The Guide to Being a DarkPoetry Member [pt 1]" by Six-Out

"Damn, if Bast gets a poem then I want one too! Only not that kind of course =) ~V."
Posted by Velvet_Raventon on "[rainbows].and.[butterflies]" by Six-Out

"Your poetry drips with romanticism. ~V."
Posted by Velvet_Raventon on "[rainbows].and.[butterflies]" by Six-Out

"You have 2 sides I know: 1 that has fun in the chat room, and 1 that writes incredible poetry. That was AWESOME! ~V."
Posted by Velvet_Raventon on "pick-sul.ated [persuasion]" by Six-Out

"This was excellent, but if I had to choose, I'd rather not read it and know that you are happy =/ ~V."
Posted by Velvet_Raventon on "matchstick muse... [one thousand pieces]" by Six-Out

"Really nice, beautiful images! I wonder if the /[]. are necessary in this poem though... I think it would have a better flow without. But it's still great =) ~V."
Posted by Velvet_Raventon on "fourty-two ashes" by Six-Out

"Oh my... Who was that written for? She sure should feel bad, but also really good for inspiring such beautiful poetry... ~V."
Posted by Velvet_Raventon on "David & Goliath" by Six-Out

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