pick-sul.ated [persuasion]
By Six-Out
novocain.d nights lip-locked with the un.believable
and a taste of delusion.
chapped lips- and the reality of dreams creating paradise
with undersold emotions. and overused imagination- life is so fucked up
in that way that makes it so beautiful
and the rain never seems to stop falling when the sun comes out.
a trivial piece to an even more- unimportant puzzle. it sometimes seems
tack.d together with a promise of forever- and negligence
pick.pocket-ed and misplaced among the catacombs of denial.
this melancholy absence-formed liaison- pierces
and tomorrow seems like such a lie
but please do. tell it to me again.
with a broken-angled smile. and a trigger.happy- vendetta
the skies are much too distant to be anything more than dust
and the stars don’t shine at midnight- like they used to
with a half-burnt cigarette. and a story to tell
this will always be my life
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Comments on "pick-sul.ated [persuasion]"
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On Sunday, December 4, 2011, WatchTheWorldCollapse
(15) wrote:
wow. deserves poem of the day.
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A former member wrote:
I really like the style of writting in this poem and its a work of art. Great..
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On Thursday, August 25, 2005, abattoir
(115) wrote:
you made me remember.I pick up the specktacles, you take me in, make me see what your saying...and, I want more.
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A former member wrote:
Amazing...write
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A former member wrote:
Such a tender and longing piece. "a trivial piece to an even more- unimportant puzzle" - absolutely marvelous.
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A former member wrote:
I love you, seckzie messican boy.
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On Monday, April 11, 2005, DoctorAsh
(371) wrote:
::applauds:: excellent poems mr six .. you never cease to create beauty in your letters -wonderfuly done
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On Sunday, April 10, 2005, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
i loved the opening lines of this. wonderful contemplative/reminiscent feel it has then the ending bringing it right up front. outstanding
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On Sunday, April 10, 2005, Lotophagi
(333) wrote:
I'll echo what Tim said - this feels so tangible yet distant, yearning and beautiful. Wonderful write, you're simply quite amazing. Thank you.
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A former member wrote:
awesome. i love the feel of this. starts and ends perfectly