Comments by Leith Plunkett
- "I love the innocence in which this is written. It could be written from a sixteen year old feeling love for the first time or the dream of love which is ageless. Beautiful and elegant. I love the delicacy of your work and how you leave so much left unsaid."
Posted by Leith Plunkett on "the sound of my name in your mouth" by disposable
- "I still think however that this may be to much even for DP. I think this has the potential to actually hurt people."
Posted by Leith Plunkett on "Within Innocence" by Nixx
- "The poem builds beautifully with feelings captured so perfectly for the first half. An awesome twist which I am really into myself on most topics. Technically a high impact piece...It is hard for me to comment in any way other than disconnecting my own personal feelings and heartache from the piece...I do not read it as morbid in any way, more sad and symbolic in nature as a coping mechanism or a realisation of what might have been. A brave topic and an even braver way to express feelings...Overall I think the symbolism excelled at its purpose It just hurt a little to much....... "
Posted by Leith Plunkett on "Within Innocence" by Nixx
- "Fantastic. I love the first stanza. I also look at it as though you have become one within yourself for better or for worse, an acceptance of sorts. "
Posted by Leith Plunkett on "Air" by sixsixnine
- "I am surprised there are no comments. The flow pleading, longing for something more. I love the last 2 lines, still so lifeless and empty even with passion dripping from the paint brush. Beautiful"
Posted by Leith Plunkett on "Porcelain Queen" by chococat_122
- "(safe meant the arms of a lover… And now… it means no lover) Such a sad transition. These two lines really say it all. The giving of yourself takes a piece of you...I love how raw and honest the piece is, it made me ache to read. Beautifully crafted.
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Posted by Leith Plunkett on "love.apprehension" by asphyxia
- "(I can see the widow at the wedding catching the bouquet and staring at it blankly) These lines especially break my heart...If it were a poem i picked up by an unknown poet I would comment on the magical yet somber imagery and how powerful it pulls on the heartstrings...Coming from yourself I also see the untold. I take the ending probably a little different than intended, more like a dying of some pure light that shall never burn as bright. You and me already know each others views and how that "bouquet" even if caught, withered to dust losing any such lustre. Overall a wonderful piece but it hurt so much to read. "
Posted by Leith Plunkett on "New Age Romantic." by Echoes of Orpheus
- "Yes the form, accidental or not. Turn your head on the side and it resembles a swan in flight. I also hear voices LOL. The simplicity adds so much more for the reader to ponder on. Well captured. "
Posted by Leith Plunkett on "The Swan" by mysticventures
- "(I screamed in a thousand different voices Only audible to the divine) Wow, what beautiful haunting lines...It reads to me as though she is some form of immortal trapped in skin and bones herself. Love/the giving of herself being her only weakness/ her achilles heel...The interpritation of poetry such an individual personal thing. Thankyou, I loved it :-) "
Posted by Leith Plunkett on "That was us" by Lylani
- "Some of the best poems I have read have been no more than 4 lines. First poem or not I like the depth and thought left for me to contemplate. Well captured"
Posted by Leith Plunkett on "my first poem" by lovechild
- "The ìnnocence makes it hurt that much more...(and i learned that some kisses are promises) I love this image, it really does paint 1000 words. Look forward to reading more :-)"
Posted by Leith Plunkett on "once upon a time..." by ebonyamore
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