Comments by xserratedsoulx
- "love the metaphores, LOVE the lines about hiding his broken smile in the sky b/c he hung the moon and you can hang the stars...simply BEAUTIFUL!!!"
Posted by xserratedsoulx on "Blow me" by BeautifullyRuined
- "i love how you said sadness is HIDING the cuts...the only thing is, all of this seems to be degrading kids who fake depression to be cool, until the very last part which seems to shift gears and say don't justify death for any of it. it could almost be tw"
Posted by xserratedsoulx on "Oxford's Defining Depression and Sadness" by Ravenblade
- "I sit and cry
I don't want to die.
i love these lines b/c i too understand the lust for blood but NOT for death. to bleed and nearly die, but it is not death i wish for, but to REALLY LIVE."
Posted by xserratedsoulx on "See Me Dead" by Myrrhkuri the fallen one
- "OMG my eyes are glazed over, the stuttering captures the feeling exactly, i love it. wonderful job, great write, i don't know how you did it, but you immortalized the feelings, congradulations, i think, it's not good to dwell, but not good to forget, eith"
Posted by xserratedsoulx on "Razor Blade Memories" by Myrrhkuri the fallen one
- "my ability to steal your soul
and make it all about me"
so fucking true! we're a self absorbed and vicious bunch!
~lauren~"
Posted by xserratedsoulx on "as a poet" by manunkind
- "beautiful. the only advice i have for you is to fix up this one stanza--the one that begins 'now living'...it just didn't seem to fit quite right to me. if you don't mind cristism. the rest, my darling, was astounding!
~lauren~"
Posted by xserratedsoulx on "I Will Always Bleed Ink" by Fading_Smile
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