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Open your eyes
By D3ADT0WN
How can you have so many tears you could drown the whole world?
And you say fuck everone and want to be heard
It just me agianst the world but the world is so empty
Why can't anyone ever listen and try to exept me?
I hate you, I don't I love you, I won't
I'm so comfused and mixed up I have no more hope
I walk around here like everythings fine and i am good
but look into my eyes and you'll see what you should..
Pain thats been locked up for so many years
It plays over and over bringing back all the fears
And through all that has happened The sadness and tears
I'm screaming out loud, all alone, can't you hear?
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© 2006 Dreamz4Pain
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On Sunday, February 8, 2009, Ashteroth
(190)
wrote:
A good piece of work I think many will relate to on some level. Esp for your age here, you show some good potential.
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A former member wrote:
I like the emphasis of the pain, the confusion. "I hate you, I don't I love you, I won't".(what I do? embrace singleness, then things become clear)
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On Sunday, November 12, 2006, mywristshurt
(405) wrote:
thats whats up... i know what one of those love-hate things can be like.. they're not at all pretty.. but you get through it, and eventually everything takes an ease off of your mind
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A former member wrote:
that was amazing!!
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On Saturday, August 19, 2006, xserratedsoulx
(212) wrote:
'It just me agianst the world but the world is so empty' love it love it LOVE It!
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