Heart Chains

By darth ren

How rude of you to blame me
For keeping a lock on my heart.
You should know better, of all people-
Unfastened it’d fall apart.

Your obsession with finding my flaws,
Makes me think- you may still care.
I should know better, of all people.
True strangers are not aware.

Broken hearts need lengthy whiles-
More than this, for mending.
You should know better, of all people.
I refuse to go on pretending.

You tell me I should just forget;
How you left it all behind.
You should know better, of all people.
Tell me truth, I’m not blind!

I never asked, “Why were you so cold?”
You likely could not say.
I should know better, of all people.
You’ll apologize some way…

I made a key for my shackle,
But I’ve kept it in my pocket.
You should know better, of all people-
Why I’m wary to let you unlock it.

I hope for you: please comeback,
But wishes may not come true.
You should know better, of all people-
Even so, I’d still love you.

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© 2006 darth ren
Published on Sunday, November 26, 2006.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: In a way, I'm reminded of all the heartache in life. This was an excellent read.

  • BoldSolitude On Tuesday, January 30, 2007, BoldSolitude (214)By person wrote:

    "Your obsession with finding my flaws, Makes me think- you may still care." so true. i enjoyed the entire poem although the lines stated above were my favorite

  • A former member wrote: Wow. Wonderful work, can realy relate to this. Excellent structure as well, good control. Love it!

  • A former member wrote: My eyes grew teary as I read the ending lines. I know much of what you feel. Lovely yet deeply saddening piece.

  • D3ADT0WN On Sunday, November 26, 2006, D3ADT0WN (185)By person wrote:

    I love it.. I know exactly how you feel, Love does has its ways. It can really suck, You just gotta stick in there. Lovely piece. |-Ezimo-|

  • elisa On Sunday, November 26, 2006, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    truly, love is unconditional.......it gives until it hurts.... and then it gives some more.... and more... and more.... until it lashes out in a violent rage of relentless hate......well said

  • Mari On Sunday, November 26, 2006, Mari (419)By person wrote:

    love sucks.... i hate everything.lol

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