Heart Chains
By darth ren
How rude of you to blame me
For keeping a lock on my heart.
You should know better, of all people-
Unfastened it’d fall apart.
Your obsession with finding my flaws,
Makes me think- you may still care.
I should know better, of all people.
True strangers are not aware.
Broken hearts need lengthy whiles-
More than this, for mending.
You should know better, of all people.
I refuse to go on pretending.
You tell me I should just forget;
How you left it all behind.
You should know better, of all people.
Tell me truth, I’m not blind!
I never asked, “Why were you so cold?”
You likely could not say.
I should know better, of all people.
You’ll apologize some way…
I made a key for my shackle,
But I’ve kept it in my pocket.
You should know better, of all people-
Why I’m wary to let you unlock it.
I hope for you: please comeback,
But wishes may not come true.
You should know better, of all people-
Even so, I’d still love you.
Comments on "Heart Chains"
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A former member wrote:
In a way, I'm reminded of all the heartache in life. This was an excellent read.
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On Tuesday, January 30, 2007, BoldSolitude
(214) wrote:
"Your obsession with finding my flaws, Makes me think- you may still care." so true. i enjoyed the entire poem although the lines stated above were my favorite
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A former member wrote:
Wow. Wonderful work, can realy relate to this. Excellent structure as well, good control. Love it!
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A former member wrote:
My eyes grew teary as I read the ending lines. I know much of what you feel. Lovely yet deeply saddening piece.
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On Sunday, November 26, 2006, D3ADT0WN
(185) wrote:
I love it.. I know exactly how you feel, Love does has its ways. It can really suck, You just gotta stick in there. Lovely piece. |-Ezimo-|
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On Sunday, November 26, 2006, elisa
(1595) wrote:
truly, love is unconditional.......it gives until it hurts.... and then it gives some more.... and more... and more.... until it lashes out in a violent rage of relentless hate......well said
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On Sunday, November 26, 2006, Mari
(419) wrote:
love sucks.... i hate everything.lol