Blow me
By BeautifullyRuined
Sluts
you blow them kisses like dandelions
keep wishing
I know you`d rather be with
anyone but me
but i crawled inside your heart
when you werent looking
and have every intention
of staying there
keep tripping over lies
blaming it all on me
like i unzipped your pants
and positioned you just so
Oh yeah i could see that happening
are you happy now
i`ll break your smile
and glue it to the sky
since you hung the moon
I guess I can hang the stars
that will be my final good gesture
before i decide your chest is no
place for your heart
it belongs in my hand
that way i can cut out all the
pieces i dont like
and toss them into the sea
so the mermaids can hold my tradgedy
I know they can keep
their mouth`s shut
unlike you
who has to tell everyone our story
like it`s something to be proud of
"Look I`ve broken the happiest girl in
the world.She was so naive she actually
trusted me."
Damn me for my stupidity
and fuck you for your cruelty
Look at the whores
blow them your love
because I`m getting tired of crying
over crushed dandelions
and blown wishes
Comments on "Blow me"
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A former member wrote:
I enjoyed it immensely. I'd link you to my first attempt at writing, but I'm far too embarrassed.
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On Monday, February 5, 2007, jack paper
(126) wrote:
brutal, you really write from the heart..
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On Tuesday, January 30, 2007, xserratedsoulx
(212) wrote:
love the metaphores, LOVE the lines about hiding his broken smile in the sky b/c he hung the moon and you can hang the stars...simply BEAUTIFUL!!!
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A former member wrote:
God men can be such assholes sometimes. Espeically ones with big egos. It was a good write despite the fact. -Marlena
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A former member wrote:
Heart wrenching I know....Wonderful write.
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On Tuesday, January 30, 2007, lstdarkness
(26) wrote:
good write. a shitty feel I know too well.
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On Tuesday, January 30, 2007, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
crushing...well done.