...said the shotgun to the head

By Imsosickxxx

Your nonsense is demanding
Expecting every waking second to be spent on you
You expect me to hold your secrets
keep your skeletons for you

Is that so you can feel the weight lifted off of you
Instead, pressing down on me
Do you feel any less responsible
I hope your black heart cracks and peels

I watched you fold your wings and fall from heaven
Bringing you black clouds and your dreams
Only fallen angels deserve to bleed from wounds dealt to the heart
I hope you realize I'll be the one pulling the trigger

"Your pain is fleeting" said the shotgun to the head

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© 2007 Imsosickxxx
Published on Friday, March 16, 2007.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • Devilish On Thursday, June 16, 2011, Devilish (2658)By person wrote:

    Yes... I will keep cuming back too! Scholar

  • A former member wrote: *CLICK* This is still kickin some serious ass ;) Scholar

  • Imsosickxxx On Wednesday, September 2, 2009, Imsosickxxx (80)By person wrote:

    Well I'm glad I can keep you coming back =P

  • Army Barbie On Thursday, April 12, 2007, Army Barbie (324)By person wrote:

    "only fallen angels deserve to bleed from wounds dealt to the heart" Shit man.

  • Dark Nymph On Friday, April 6, 2007, Dark Nymph (25)By person wrote:

    Excellent!

  • Dancing_Monkey On Wednesday, March 28, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1246)By person wrote:

    The title drew me here from Mab's favorits. then I have to admit that I can see why she favored it. a good point and a good story :)

  • A former member wrote: this was great.loved the ending!

  • A former member wrote: lovely. ~ saddened.

  • A former member wrote: Excellent, that's all I can say.

  • Aunty Depressant On Friday, March 16, 2007, Aunty Depressant (434)By person wrote:

    I fell in love with this from the first line. So true what is so trite can bring so much chaos. *In past use to name the big guns Simon..for simon says..weird family tradition ;P

  • Alanarchy On Friday, March 16, 2007, Alanarchy (1200)By person wrote:

    Fuck yeah.

  • Mylissa On Friday, March 16, 2007, Mylissa (845)By person wrote:

    wow, great imagery.

  • BeautifullyRuined On Friday, March 16, 2007, BeautifullyRuined (94)By person wrote:

    I really loved the ending.Wonderful write.

  • The Shattered Heart On Friday, March 16, 2007, The Shattered Heart (32)By person wrote:

    As always sweetie. Excellent work


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