beautiful monsters [of elegant kisses]
By Six-Out
co-written with Amy (Elegant Kiss)
whispers and whimpers.
like old love songs on vinyl.
every emotion.
is filled with cracks.
My own,
I think you are my constant,
the cruelest good,
But I am weary,
and would love you if only I could
for the woman that loved
died long ago
breaking verses like hearts on saturday nights.
with knives of diamond and lint.
.and oh how we've spent ourselves a web.
and now I'm stuck. sucking words of hollow wisdom.
lips singing of stars- struck by strings of.
who.we.aren't.
and I'm burnt out on chasing silent dreams
and shadows of plaster-cast emotions.
because this mirror.d love-scape is broken.
we're lonely.
Come to me in a soft eyed sleep,
Lull me with your song
Beloved,
put your ever voiceless rhyme on my forehead,
In sweet notes crowned with a kiss
like melodies that idle raindrops
tap dimly on window panes.
In the sweetest rain
heavily on this little heart
my arms are sore, love.
and I want to wrap you in my heartscripts.
but I can't grip you with broken hands.
and my wrists are bleeding from singing
love into your ears.
Oh, follow me
come and follow
and follow.
But wait my heart, let our hearts break into caged tears
just this once, and then ever more.
kiss me. with your tongue of truth.
I'd love to listen to the stars scream in symphony
and break down with the collapsing of the skies.
for this scene is breathtaking.
mend me with meloncholy. enchantress.
Kiss me before the bloom of your rose is the fearful
green of my leaf
And then,
Our sweetest when
when the stars bend down to hear until
before rest when we count the holes they leave
we're resting. in beautiful.
peace.
Comments on "beautiful monsters [of elegant kisses]"
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A former member wrote:
Beautiful! I'm sad all of her poems are off the site
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A former member wrote:
I like how raw this poem is. Perhaps, "raw" isn't the right word but, it's the first one that comes to mind. Thank you, thank you, thank you for sharing it.
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On Saturday, July 31, 2010, Riven Waker
(317) wrote:
a beautiful escape - the experience of taking in the journey this piece - brilliant
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On Friday, September 25, 2009, Ashteroth
(190) wrote:
Wow, that was truly amazing. I was gonna say how I loved the first lines play on words but as I kept reading every verse was just as fantastic as the last. Real quality piece that I will bookmark in fact ~Ash
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On Friday, August 8, 2008, Elegant Kiss
(178) wrote:
I hope you're well. I'm sorry our friendship didn't last.
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On Friday, May 18, 2007, Anth
(1126) wrote:
I always thought I'd commented on this.Ive read it so often.
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On Friday, May 18, 2007, Anth
(1126) wrote:
remember when we were going to write that collab. we had something in common at the time to write of. strange how things worked out. although perhaps inevitable. I sometimes feel poets have their own kind of fate
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On Saturday, May 19, 2007, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
Yea. Things change a lot, sometimes not for the best. People grow up, and realize it's not best to be a dick all the time. At least that happened to me.
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On Saturday, December 2, 2006, BeautifullyRuined
(93) wrote:
Amazing.That`s all i can say.
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A former member wrote:
wow...
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On Tuesday, June 27, 2006, Malice In Wonderland
(976) wrote:
you're both beautiful...
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On Wednesday, May 10, 2006, PoeticHellion
(191) wrote:
If you guys had a kid, it would be like... the Poetic Master of the Universe. Yes. That it would be.
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On Wednesday, May 10, 2006, lordshadow
(153) wrote:
Wow... only this time I actually said it out loud. I don't think this could have been a more perfect collaberation.. with absolutely beautiful results. So much emotion... it brought me to tears. Thank you.
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On Wednesday, May 10, 2006, Elegant Kiss
(178) wrote:
*breathesmiles* I do love you, Josh.
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On Tuesday, May 9, 2006, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
Lush and subsuming and beautiful; a wonderful combined and entwined piece of magic here. Gorgeous work.
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On Tuesday, May 9, 2006, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
Never thought anything so sweet could come from someone i've always thought was bitter. Great write. I really enjoyed the passion thrown into this. :) ~*~Tart~*~
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On Tuesday, May 9, 2006, Elegant Kiss
(178) wrote:
Sweetest Jon.. Thank you for doing this with me, beautiful monster! Love ya babe. xoxo.
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On Tuesday, May 9, 2006, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
Amy Amy. You're my brain-mate. Sometimes I feel I'd be lost if I lost you. So, thank you. ;)
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On Tuesday, May 9, 2006, Dei
(663) wrote:
its lovely