What |COULD| I have done?

By ashottothetemple

"I didn't mean to!
I had to kill him,
He just wouldn't ... stop ... crying."
~Myself on the Death of Spirett

Now listening to the radio these ...days...
It's fxuxcxk
Or
L+o+v+e

You know? the f4o4u4r letter words?

Do you know what happened to melody?
But what could (I) have done?
I didn't live in the 50's (1967 passed before me)

I can sit and listen to songs2fuck2
I could sing with the best of 'em
Those are love songs right?
No ever answered me, so I didn't know.
(?)

I once read
"We fuck to songs that have no rhythm
and
that's why I'm so in love with you."

Didn't make sense to me until I
Was used for >.

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© 2007 BrandonWJBradley
Published on Sunday, January 28, 2007.     Filed under: "Satire" and "Poetry"
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  • Nixx On Sunday, August 14, 2011, Nixx (229)By person wrote:

    i like how you've set this out. the intent goes much deeper than what you say. i like this in a poem :) well written.

  • Drea On Thursday, February 10, 2011, Drea (1485)By person wrote:

    I miss seeing you around.

  • BeautifullyRuined On Tuesday, March 20, 2007, BeautifullyRuined (94)By person wrote:

    This honestly made me laugh out loud.I myself think todays music is meaningless.It makes no sense.

  • Bella Butchery On Monday, February 5, 2007, Bella Butchery (729)By person wrote:

    nice name, you are worthy of it my fellow head shot brother! got to read more of you, totally dig this

  • K_Love On Tuesday, January 30, 2007, K_Love (526)By person wrote:

    Really loved this one, it was a very fun write. Wow. Awesomely written as always.

  • A former member wrote: Just the way this was written was awesome. Kinda of like an "oohhh ahhh" Well done. -Marlena

  • carlosjackal On Sunday, January 28, 2007, carlosjackal (2531)By person wrote:

    The jaunty rhythms were fantastic and the whole thing was an enjoyably delicious ride. Top stuff, Brandon!

  • capt_funguy On Sunday, January 28, 2007, capt_funguy (778)By person wrote:

    this was simply awesome ... sudden spotlight on the hidden obvious ... great structure , fun read ... cool man .. funguy

  • A former member wrote: well done. ~ red.

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