What |COULD| I have done?
By ashottothetemple
"I didn't mean to!
I had to kill him,
He just wouldn't ... stop ... crying."
~Myself on the Death of Spirett
Now listening to the radio these ...days...
It's fxuxcxk
Or
L+o+v+e
You know? the f4o4u4r letter words?
Do you know what happened to melody?
But what could (I) have done?
I didn't live in the 50's (1967 passed before me)
I can sit and listen to songs2fuck2
I could sing with the best of 'em
Those are love songs right?
No ever answered me, so I didn't know.
(?)
I once read
"We fuck to songs that have no rhythm
and
that's why I'm so in love with you."
Didn't make sense to me until I
Was used for >.
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© 2007 BrandonWJBradley
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On Sunday, August 14, 2011, Nixx
(235) wrote:
i like how you've set this out. the intent goes much deeper than what you say. i like this in a poem :) well written.
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On Thursday, February 10, 2011, Drea
(1388) wrote:
I miss seeing you around.
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On Tuesday, March 20, 2007, BeautifullyRuined
(93) wrote:
This honestly made me laugh out loud.I myself think todays music is meaningless.It makes no sense.
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On Monday, February 5, 2007, Bella Butchery
(696) wrote:
nice name, you are worthy of it my fellow head shot brother! got to read more of you, totally dig this
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On Tuesday, January 30, 2007, K_Love
(525) wrote:
Really loved this one, it was a very fun write. Wow. Awesomely written as always.
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A former member wrote:
Just the way this was written was awesome. Kinda of like an "oohhh ahhh" Well done. -Marlena
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On Sunday, January 28, 2007, carlosjackal
(2787) wrote:
The jaunty rhythms were fantastic and the whole thing was an enjoyably delicious ride. Top stuff, Brandon!
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On Sunday, January 28, 2007, capt_funguy
(777) wrote:
this was simply awesome ... sudden spotlight on the hidden obvious ... great structure , fun read ... cool man .. funguy
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A former member wrote:
well done. ~ red.