What |COULD| I have done?

By ashottothetemple

"I didn't mean to!
I had to kill him,
He just wouldn't ... stop ... crying."
~Myself on the Death of Spirett

Now listening to the radio these ...days...
It's fxuxcxk

You know? the f4o4u4r letter words?

Do you know what happened to melody?
But what could (I) have done?
I didn't live in the 50's (1967 passed before me)

I can sit and listen to songs2fuck2
I could sing with the best of 'em
Those are love songs right?
No ever answered me, so I didn't know.

I once read
"We fuck to songs that have no rhythm
that's why I'm so in love with you."

Didn't make sense to me until I
Was used for >.

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© 2007 BrandonWJBradley
Published on Sunday, January 28, 2007.     Filed under: "Satire" and "Poetry"
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  • Nixx On Sunday, August 14, 2011, Nixx (229)By person wrote:

    i like how you've set this out. the intent goes much deeper than what you say. i like this in a poem :) well written.

  • Drea On Thursday, February 10, 2011, Drea (1485)By person wrote:

    I miss seeing you around.

  • BeautifullyRuined On Tuesday, March 20, 2007, BeautifullyRuined (94)By person wrote:

    This honestly made me laugh out loud.I myself think todays music is meaningless.It makes no sense.

  • Bella Butchery On Monday, February 5, 2007, Bella Butchery (729)By person wrote:

    nice name, you are worthy of it my fellow head shot brother! got to read more of you, totally dig this

  • K_Love On Tuesday, January 30, 2007, K_Love (526)By person wrote:

    Really loved this one, it was a very fun write. Wow. Awesomely written as always.

  • A former member wrote: Just the way this was written was awesome. Kinda of like an "oohhh ahhh" Well done. -Marlena

  • carlosjackal On Sunday, January 28, 2007, carlosjackal (2531)By person wrote:

    The jaunty rhythms were fantastic and the whole thing was an enjoyably delicious ride. Top stuff, Brandon!

  • capt_funguy On Sunday, January 28, 2007, capt_funguy (778)By person wrote:

    this was simply awesome ... sudden spotlight on the hidden obvious ... great structure , fun read ... cool man .. funguy

  • A former member wrote: well done. ~ red.

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