Comments by All Members
- "I like the rambling nature of this, lots of depth hidden under layers of ridiculousness and surrounded by high fences of offensiveness. : ) The lines "He's nailed to a cross.
But, they do that to thinkers a lot these days" definitely resonated with me. Good to see you posting something! Ciao, T/S
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Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on ""Put That In Your Buddha and Smoke It" Revisited" by Doc
- "I kind of feel you. It's interesting to read old poetry... but the one thay is being written today is more worth."
Posted by Nimue44 on "Sober Thoughs on Writing" by Doc
- "I liked the easy transitions from one morsel of thought to the next. I went along for the ride and ate them up. congratulations, and well deserved."
Posted by Patches on "Salvation is a Dented Pen" by Doc
- "Wow. Great work. I can't claim to understand all of it, but this is an exotic work that held me to the end. (i admit that i don;t comrehend the ending). Great stuff."
Posted by megaprime81 on "A River Ran Through It" by Doc
- "I've read this and concluded that you have been away too long from this island of misfits. Come back to us. right us pretty witty things. :)"
Posted by Dei on "Intellectualism" by Doc
- "you live! it's nice to read your ponderings again...and such sequential reflective thoughts leading to its target with each stanza, the artful critique of modernism swirled nonchalantly to the depths of a drink...alone. like fixing the flaws of a wretched world would be as futile as rectifying oneself. dark poetry. =] -=AK=-"
Posted by ApathysKiss on "Thoughts In General" by Doc
- "good piece. Seinfeld said, 'I don't have time now, give me your home #, I'll call you later." telemarketer said, 'I don't like to be called at home.' Seinfeld said.'now you know how I feel'... "
Posted by FadedBlues on "Thoughts In General" by Doc
- "indeed... three of my most favorite things wrapped up in a bundle of worn-out reflection.... I could point out some typos, but I think I'll just quietly bask in the futility of this and slump away. thanks, doc. it's good to read even if the words are hideously mirrored in despair. welcome back"
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Thoughts In General" by Doc
- "Has a very nice feel to it. Seems warm and welcoming, yet kind of sad at times. I like how it portrayed the experience of "the blues life" so to speak. It's familiar to me so I know it well. The poem in itself was also good, however I found certain parts to be a bit inconsistent. Nothing that ruined it overall though."
Posted by The Black Lark on "The Fall of the Unfiltered Camel Blues" by Doc
- "How do you come up with this?!? This is amazing! The imagery and creativity going on here in enough to blow your mind!!! This is beautiful yet brutal. Loved it all. Write on:)"
Posted by Ladyhawke on "Death of the Rose" by Doc
- "Oh. My. God. Just. . . wow. I cant. . .i dont know what to say. This read, tho long, takes you on a journey, one that i never wanted to end, and with possibilities unknown. It kind of reminds me of a dream like state. Filled with smoke and mirrors. This totally kept my interest, and the imagery was PERFECT!!! This is amazing. Great job. Keep it comin:)"
Posted by Ladyhawke on "Salvation is a Dented Pen" by Doc
- "I just got my bottle... well let me not lie... I grabbed my bottle and I sooo drink to that... Nice to come across things to toast too when im usualy just tippin it back! Nice!"
Posted by Devilish on "Thoughts on Blues and Peace" by Doc
- "I'm trying to figure out if the typos were intentional...because if they were, they're a brilliant play, especially the "a lost these days". Wonderful irony here..."
Posted by Unknown on "Put That in Your Buddha and Smoke It" by Doc
- "this feels like a massive rolling wave, far out to sea, slowly, inevitably making it's wave to crash upon a shore somewhere... with the question - does one wave matter? does it have a remembrance? beautiful, beautiful writing - and quite a lulling romantic (stylistically) feel."
Posted by Lotophagi on "Salvation is a Dented Pen" by Doc
- "this seemed something like blind faith to me...unsteady steps taken eagerly..a crooked smile worn as long as you can keep walking..it seemed fragmented to me or perhaps that was just the images that flashed into my head like an old black and white western..interesting and glad to see you posting again ~k"
Posted by Sin on "Ever Existence of Explanations " by Doc
- "I read this piece and there is something about the others written by you that read as almost whispers of thoughts…soft-spoken as if in mid-sentence of speaking…it is as if your voice was present only in my mind, causing me to hang on to each word waiting for the next. An almost intoxication…a fixation that could only be realized with each complete thought…each word.
I enjoyed this write very much and I will be reading more of your works. Thank you.
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Posted by Lavenia on "This is New" by Doc
- "I always cry at hellos and goodbyes and the parts in between. But this really struck a chord within me, one that I haven't acknowledged in quite some time. This is glorious, the best and most genuine kind of tale. It's an infinite pleasure and priviledge to read you. Thank you."
Posted by Unknown on "Good Evening, Sir" by Doc
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