Death of the Rose
By Doc
Alas the rose,
The elevator of my solitude has stuck
Not to my own sentient thoughts dwell within my body
Or the body of my other,
Outward it seeks, flinging past oceans
Desperate and searching
Filled with lust and terror.
The carriage noisily went by
On the cobblestones,
The woman on the corner was splashed
With muddy water
Her clothes molded to her body,
The sin of thought, without action I might add,
Cloistered virtue broken by one mere curve.
The body finds itself more commonly in malaise,
Thrills and its seekers no longer provide
The sustenance required by that of youth
How can the epic pursuit of the fleshen ,
Be bound to the mundane,
It causes the senses to bound a plenty
At the discovery of the vastness of their world.
With consumed grief
The body will do strange things
For example, the woman in the corner,
Her love is the man in the casket.
She will die and be reborn tonight.
Over and over.
Because of me.
Comments on "Death of the Rose"
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On Thursday, June 30, 2011, Ladyhawke
(392) wrote:
How do you come up with this?!? This is amazing! The imagery and creativity going on here in enough to blow your mind!!! This is beautiful yet brutal. Loved it all. Write on:)
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On Monday, April 14, 2008, colorapathy
(50) wrote:
I never use the word perfect when describing things, but this, this is as close as I have seen. Very well done.
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On Tuesday, February 28, 2006, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
strong imagery.....articulate and lucid...............well done.............urban
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On Sunday, February 26, 2006, ApathysKiss
(377) wrote:
'How can the epic pursuit of the fleshen, Be bound to the mundane, It causes the senses to bound a plenty At the discovery of the vastness of their world.' i'll try to not give such an empty response to something so thought-provoking such as this...
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On Sunday, February 26, 2006, ApathysKiss
(377) wrote:
this was quite a solemn analysis to the psychosis that dwells within the subjective effects that surround and are not endured. least was my take...ever probing...the mind a prerogative to imprison. nice work, as always.
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On Saturday, February 25, 2006, manywalks
(747) wrote:
Because of mr. Hmmmm. This strokes a little deeper with each read through, tantilizingly so.
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A former member wrote:
wow...that was a trip now wasn't it. You use of words...is...simply mind blowing.~Diviana
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On Thursday, February 23, 2006, Possesion
(136) wrote:
sad. really. glad to see you posting.
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On Wednesday, February 22, 2006, ApathysKiss
(377) wrote:
i'll come back to this after my weekend trip...but it's fantabulousnesstest that you've posted something new! bb. -=michelle=-
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On Wednesday, February 22, 2006, D3ADT0WN
(185) wrote:
cool...Goob job on this i like it