Comments by colorapathy

  • "I would love to speak it for people some time. I enjoy poetry readings as well as writing it. Thank you for the comment!"
    Posted by colorapathy on "The Scene" by colorapathy
  • "this poem amused me for a moment, but it doesn't flow as well as I'd like it to. The random switch from rhyming to not with little bo peep threw me off a bit as well."
    Posted by colorapathy on "Nursery Rhymes for Tiny Tots" by l mo
  • "I like the flow of your work in general, as well as the subject. You remind me of someone I know very well. This piece is the one that caught my attention the most. Well done."
    Posted by colorapathy on "Willingness" by The Lipstick Factor
  • "the punctuation isn't particularly vital to me to this piece, was written in more of a stream of conciousness style. feel free to change punctiation to whatever you like. lol. Its like the desperation pleasure/pain contradiction that is my life. I really can't explain it better than the piece does. i like listening to people's interpritations of work though. It gives interesting insite into their minds."
    Posted by colorapathy on "Moonpain" by colorapathy
  • "I never use the word perfect when describing things, but this, this is as close as I have seen. Very well done."
    Posted by colorapathy on "Death of the Rose" by Doc
  • "I'm going to have to limit myself to one of your peoms a day... or possibly longer.. to collect and absorb all of my thoughts from them. very intricate and interesting as well as superbly worded and blunt. Again, an incredible piece that makes you think."
    Posted by colorapathy on "lunghaus" by capt_funguy
  • "ALright I'm addicted, I love your style of writing. Its paced at such a breakneck speed and always leaves you breathless and wondering how you got to the end. It makes me want to cradle my head, and go back to the begining and read it over.. rather like a roller coaster that makes you sick. Intense and enjoyable."
    Posted by colorapathy on "a braille catastrophy" by Cassandra
  • "wow.. this is really incredible. it took me a moment to fall into the general rhythm of the piece, but one i realized it i was alright. Incredible discriptions and phrases wrapped in such a way as to stampede you breathlessly to the end of the piece, feeling as though your heart might stop and your mind might never be the same.. then the end comes and completely baffles you, pausing you in your headlong rush, almost as if you were dead. very nice."
    Posted by colorapathy on "shards of epilepsy" by Cassandra
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