Comments by All Members
- "Loved this and the lines you chose to pen.."moonlight eyes cry" that line left me with an awesome image to kick around in my mind. Beautifully done."
Posted by River Lily on "words & passwords" by theBAC
- "i read this so often..............it either calms me or hurls me against a wall....................."
Posted by Unknown on "the war of art" by theBAC
- "stunning vignettes of noticed nuances.. .. .. .timeless little intimacies that make everydae more visible in its own truth and momentary eclipses....good good words and a great great "
Posted by Unknown on "-----" by theBAC
- " a very well constructed and written poem..my one critic would be the tone fluctuation...some stanza are solumn and dreay while others seem quite optimstic..so i was left wondering exactly what tone you wished to poem to set."
Posted by Unknown on "without a title" by theBAC
- "For some reason this takes me to the most joyous moments of my teenage years...Very vivid and wonderful work that deserves way more comments."
Posted by carlosjackal on "the war of art" by theBAC
- "holy cranberries! :) the echo of un.resolve can haunt and hunt down even the most diligent [or dosed] mind. . . . .seeps into the soul eventually...and eternally. .. .makes for fitful unrest indeed."
Posted by Unknown on "zombie! zombie! zombie!" by theBAC
- "This is such an amazing thing to write down. To share with us and to keep so you can always remember what you feel and what you felt at that time. You wrote so much here, you told your son, and you told all of us what life has coming for us. To any one that reads this all the way through they will know that there is more then now to life. This was so nice to read - Love, not hate. Hugs, not stabbings. Families, not loneliness. Support, not letting society raise your kids. This work really hit me hard it is so personal to you, but I think most people that read it will feel every bit of it - I know I did!"
Posted by Adam on "a part of us" by theBAC
- "I really don't know what to say to express what I feel right now. The story was horrible, the story was told wonderfully, the story told us all of simple dangers of those drunken nights gone too far. The story of this man and the little girls is hard to read, but very powerful - May it help this to never happen to anyone else."
Posted by Adam on "ghost" by theBAC
- "Man...i've been reading your work again, and I must say i'm amazed yet again...your depth of feeling and ability to express emotively is beyond belief - you tell stories, but by god you tell them like a true storyteller. My stomach ached through the whole piece. Brilliant."
Posted by Solace on "ghost" by theBAC
- "kay... the title drew me in, and now I sit and wonder how many are doin this right now, across the world... never thought of it before, but somehow it seems to capture the futility of human"
Posted by Unknown on "masticating his testibles" by theBAC
- "you know, every time i read this. i am in less blind awe and more of a head nod interpretation. it's just good. and it never gets old, because it's only the truth. and the truth is just always, silently background(ingly) present. it just rocks me. hard . "
Posted by Mari on "black leather couch" by theBAC
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