you kept our love in a jar

(& forgot to poke holes for it to breathe)

visions of your charcoal eyes
& ember lips
is what provides warmth
on cold nights
& a light to write by

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Published on Wednesday, July 7, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "you kept our love in a jar"

On Wednesday, June 25, 2008, veingo (526) wrote:

Oh how many times I've scrawled poetry to that same light. This is a bit of perfection. ^V^
On Tuesday, August 3, 2004, shortandpretentious (9) wrote:

i really like this one, brett. succinct but simultaneously abstract. i also like your dictum.
A former member wrote: This is not any way minimized by its size...simply perfect.
On Wednesday, July 7, 2004, Anth (1126) wrote:

another (mini)masterpiece,i really like this one,one to read over and over