you kept our love in a jar

By theBAC

(& forgot to poke holes for it to breathe)

visions of your charcoal eyes
& ember lips
is what provides warmth
on cold nights
& a light to write by

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Copyright 2004 Brett Alan Coker
Published on Wednesday, July 7, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • veingo On Wednesday, June 25, 2008, veingo (533)By person wrote:

    Oh how many times I've scrawled poetry to that same light. This is a bit of perfection. ^V^

  • shortandpretentious On Tuesday, August 3, 2004, shortandpretentious (9)By person wrote:

    i really like this one, brett. succinct but simultaneously abstract. i also like your dictum.

  • A former member wrote: This is not any way minimized by its size...simply perfect.

  • Anth On Wednesday, July 7, 2004, Anth (1133)By person wrote:

    another (mini)masterpiece,i really like this one,one to read over and over

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