the christmas i got batteries but no toys

By theBAC


i’m the “v”
not the virgin
or vigilante
just the “v”
not the violinist
or ventriliquist

i am merely the “v”
in that poem by silverstein
the “v” in “love”
& the only one to show

that is how i see some friendships
i’m there, ready
to battle, brawl, or bawl
all in the name of love
but “l”, “o”, & “e”
called in sick

i’m the most giving of givers
& friendliest of friends
the most loyal of the loyalists
& i shall be ‘til the end

i am just the “v”
who puts more out
& gets less back

i’m just the “v”
smiling
but wanting more friends

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Copyright 2004 Brett Alan Coker
Published on Friday, October 22, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Cinn On Sunday, February 6, 2005, Cinn (152)By person wrote:

    Awesome write. Amazingly done. -Cinn

  • A former member wrote: The message behind this was just brilliant and the learning is certainly not worn lightly. Just divine. ~ Rose.

  • DarkDruidess On Friday, October 22, 2004, DarkDruidess (313)By person wrote:

    I liked the message this conveyed to me...yeah I liked it a lot...

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Friday, October 22, 2004, TropicalSnowstorm (1580)By person wrote:

    Cool piece! I lo e this one. Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • worm On Saturday, July 15, 2017, worm (1149)By person wrote:

    Steve, you must LO E to crack me up!

  • A former member wrote: im V too..welcome to the club..and i really like the title

  • A former member wrote: good stuff, well said indeed.

  • Zahtsk On Friday, October 22, 2004, Zahtsk (26)By person wrote:

    aee... good poem

  • physicalgraffiti On Friday, October 22, 2004, physicalgraffiti (56)By person wrote:

    wow..awesome poem. i love the theme. thank you so much

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