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dio? who dis? dis ain't dr. dre?
By theBAC
tell the boy with scabby knees
and bleeding elbows
to climb up on the roof
and prove to the world
that he exists
scream your lungs out
to cause a blackout
for glory you must give it all
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Copyright 2004 Brett Alan Coker
Published on Tuesday, March 16, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "dio? who dis? dis ain't dr. dre?"
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A former member wrote:
amazing. keep on dude.
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On Sunday, April 11, 2004, Dancing_Monkey
(1228)
wrote:
the title is distant from the poem to me. but hey I'm just a monkey. Nice write never the less.. :O) Peter
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On Sunday, April 11, 2004, Cinn
(152) wrote:
this is cool its like yeah good write
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On Wednesday, March 17, 2004, OLd SouL
(717) wrote:
Hey this is pretty cool.. I think a better title is in order to suit it. :::OLd
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A former member wrote:
I love this poem! It's 8 frick'in lines and it's amazing. I love the conviction of the piece. Very nice.
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On Wednesday, March 17, 2004, AshtrayDirt
(31) wrote:
O. I like this one better than the last one i read of yours. This one starts out with a ballsy visual and holds up its promise to the reader. the length is perfect.Good Write. -Dirt
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