words & passwords

By theBAC

sparkling crescent smile
moonlit eyes cry
ready to sigh & scream
baby doll singing
wringing her dripping clothes
young child writing
bleeding some poetry & prose
this is, to me, how it seems
this is the killing of our dreams

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Copyright 2004 Brett Alan Coker
Published on Monday, April 12, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • River Lily On Sunday, October 23, 2011, River Lily (1150)By person wrote:

    Loved this and the lines you chose to pen.."moonlight eyes cry" that line left me with an awesome image to kick around in my mind. Beautifully done. Scholar

  • AshtrayDirt On Tuesday, April 13, 2004, AshtrayDirt (33)By person wrote:

    i read your other recent submissions and if you want total honesty which i hope you will accept constructively...i didn't think they were nearly as good as some of the other stuff i've read of yours. but this, this is better. -Dirt.

  • suicideseason On Sunday, August 28, 2005, suicideseason (1697)By person wrote:

    Honesty...Uncommonly good.

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