freedom fries (or the all-american all-stars)
By theBAC
he doesn’t know he is going
to become a junky
in two years
& overdose in three
she doesn’t know she is going
to fall in love tomorrow
& be heart broke
in six months
he doesn’t know his mom
will kill herself
in two weeks
she doesn’t know her son
wants her to die
he doesn’t know his girlfriend
is sucking another cock
right now
she doesn’t know the cock
she is sucking
has syphilis
he doesn’t know he has syphilis
& will spread it
to three more mouths
& cunts
she doesn’t know she is gonna
lose her virginity
tomorrow night
& that it won’t
be by choice
he doesn’t know he is gonna
lose control
& rape his girlfriend
she doesn’t know she’s gonna
marry a future pedophile
he doesn’t know he will eventually
molest his daughter
she doesn’t know she will
slowly poison her husband
over the course
of four years
he doesn’t know he is gonna
drive drunk
& kill a family
of five
she doesn’t know what love is
he doesn’t know how to love
she doesn’t know she is gonna
be buried in a barrel
he doesn’t know he is gonna
discover his sister’s body
buried on their farm
she doesn’t know her first drink
will lead her to
a hundred random rooms
& to dozens
of anonymous meetings
he doesn’t know his first joint
will burn down his house
she doesn’t know that
sperm donor #3Z95
is her brother
he doesn’t know that
tomorrow he
isn’t going to wake up
she doesn’t know her father
he doens’t know his mother
she doesn’t do anal
he doesn’t know he
is gonna make her
she doesn’t know that
the tele-marketer
that called her
was her long-lost father
he doesn’t know the gun he bought
when he was 22
will blow out the brains
of his son, when
he is 7
she doesn’t know the man
she has been sleeping next to
& calls her husband
he doesn’t know his daughter is being
double-teamed right now
she doesn’t know her son
is jerking off
to gay porn
he doesn’t know why
when he closes his eyes
to write
this is what he sees
he doesn’t know why
it doesn’t bother him
anymore
he doesn’t know...
Comments on "freedom fries (or the all-american all-stars)"
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A former member wrote:
And the cycle goes on...
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On Sunday, June 8, 2008, Adam
(242) wrote:
Damn.
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On Thursday, July 7, 2005, Solace
(1065) wrote:
The interconnections...the butterfly effect and all that jazz, but you made it real, you made it sickening and engage the full scope of horror that one misled moment can create
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On Thursday, July 7, 2005, Solace
(1065) wrote:
this was an amazing piece, so horrible, so deleterious...
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On Wednesday, July 6, 2005, sIo
(898) wrote:
fuck.
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On Wednesday, July 6, 2005, Malice In Wonderland
(976) wrote:
I'm with Jon...I know not what to say...
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On Wednesday, July 6, 2005, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
Holy shit...
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On Wednesday, July 6, 2005, SorrowSoul
(54) wrote:
There was alot of thought put into this write. Though, at times, slightly disturbing but very real all in the same. Good work.
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A former member wrote:
This seemed to stop my breathing for a while there. Fucking AMAZING. All those connections... Just got more and more intense... So way out and so totally possible at the same time. I feel so insignificant. ~Wish Upon A Star
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On Monday, April 19, 2004, manywalks
(747) wrote:
The power of freedom...shackling. Powerful and emotionally evoking piece. ~ mw
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On Sunday, April 18, 2004, LoneWolf
(33) wrote:
Exquisite piece of writing, great detail and a very strong message for the reader. It's sad that things like this happen, but unfortunately it's a fact of life. ~*~Lone Wolf~*~
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On Sunday, April 18, 2004, physicalgraffiti
(56) wrote:
damn...*wipes tear* honestly, this is the only piece that has managed to strike up tears for me. holy shit. that was excellent and very very powerful.
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On Wednesday, July 6, 2005, Anth
(1126) wrote:
i wish i hadnt read this, i couldnt take my eyes off it though
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On Wednesday, July 6, 2005, Anth
(1126) wrote:
some things will always be incomprehensible,
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On Wednesday, July 6, 2005, Anth
(1126) wrote:
some wounds will never heal