in emergency

By theBAC


because sometimes the hurt won't leave
and friends say they care but don't
it's when you feel alone
that you most likely are
so give in and end it
it's the easiest way

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Copyright 2004 Brett Alan Coker
Published on Wednesday, October 27, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I can really relate to this... Thank you for sharing. It's simple and true.

  • blue On Wednesday, July 27, 2005, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    Holy...! I just told my best friend of 20 years to fuck off today!! I'd call this COINCIDENCE! :) ~b

  • The Crimson Queen On Wednesday, December 15, 2004, The Crimson Queen (918)By person wrote:

    yea, i know how that is

  • A former member wrote: This provokes ponderance . . you have expressed raw truth in so few words. Wonderful. ~ Rose.

  • rondant On Monday, November 1, 2004, rondant (58)By person wrote:

    this is kind of deep, i had to read it twice

  • A former member wrote: It sometimes is....

  • Solace On Wednesday, October 27, 2004, Solace (1069)By person wrote:

    *smiles*

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