Comments by All Members
- "Foreplay of the soul is so under-rated,
to put aside the physical intent and just 'be' with another, .. dun get me wrong,.. i enjoy some serial linen loven as much as the next entity but to hone in on the energy that started the revolution can bring emotion of unchartered waters, .. amalgamate the two and you got yourself something in the realm of magic. "
Posted by Unknown on "fractured fairy tale" by Crush Room
- "when all else is perephiral, and thoughts rest in calming hopes,...bringing forth a little synchronosity...lovely moments where all is not lost..."
Posted by Unknown on "....Daydreamer......." by Crush Room
- "love this,...read it the other day and it just stuck with me, so well written,..simplified understanding yet word choice creates beautiful personal impacts along the way,..read it like 10 times, jus gonna fav it,..makes it easier to find. "
Posted by Unknown on "..days like this" by Crush Room
- "This was so beautiful. It was soft, and lulling. The long lines followed by short lines gaves that quality to it. This is a peice that connects deeply, to arouse a memory, melting the heart of the reader. It's comforting, and at the same time...saddening. Hmm. Whatever the present situation, it is always lovely to know that the memories will always be preserved and untainted. :)"
Posted by Kaleidoscope_Heart on "fractured fairy tale" by Crush Room
- "I think that was the point that I was trying to make....it was an experience that was disrupted...I was trying to capture it metaphorically (ie thats exactly how I feel/felt). Thanks for your comments.....thank you xx "
Posted by Crush Room on "Perforated" by Crush Room
- "True, some things are better left unsaid, and some things cause pain when they are said, but are necessary to move forward... or to illustrate the need to change direction. Very good meaning in this."
Posted by Scarrzz on "..days like this" by Crush Room
- "I really like the concept developing here... and the hollow hands, which seem apt to impart holes and nothingness... or to devour. But I wonder at the words in the final stanza... and if the theme is not disrupted there. unique and intriguing, however, nice work."
Posted by Unknown on "Perforated" by Crush Room
- "Some things are better left unsaid...but some things when left unsaid do not make it better...I really liked this. "
Posted by Unknown on "..days like this" by Crush Room
- "i keep coming back to this... its texture hauntingly familiar... like finding a feeling painted in the same colours i'd imagined in my own head but never had the elegance to put into words... outstanding "
Posted by NikesRain on "The Irony of Her War" by Crush Room
- "mmm,..nicely put to.get.her, and the piece at the end was a summary of the above, things of real and worth rarely come easy,..good stuff. "
Posted by Unknown on "The Irony of Her War" by Crush Room
- "beautifully rendered and the images of your metaphors, even your aesthetics leads to a purgatorial descent/ascent. . .. great write. ness "
Posted by Unknown on "C.Rush Room" by Crush Room
- "Thanks for your comments...quite simply put it is about the everyday demons - more specificically about change when everyone around you expects you to take the easy way out but your heart tells you it's time to do what's right for you...I love the fluidity of writing, though, and how you can apply your own meaning and still get a lot out of it - make sense?? xx"
Posted by Crush Room on "The Irony of Her War" by Crush Room
- "Really very beautiful.. hopefully one day they'll be back to pick up the treasure they left. Really, a very sweet idea. Well done."
Posted by wilted on "Sunken Treasure...." by Crush Room
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