Something He Needs To Know

By Crush Room

Life...formely known as hers
Ended unexpectantly two hundred and eighty eight days ago.
A tall, solitary figure stood in the dark, oblivious to the hell he was about to raise, yet prominent in her crystal ball.

She...was about to die.
She didnt know it.....she didnt even realise she was on her last legs.
She was blinded by love a thousand moons ago...shut down by her knight and his trespassing and craving for all things her.

Transgression disrupts her sense of reality as darkness brings her to his fold....
An inevitable discomfort that squeezes the toxic life out of her....

A confusion, so beautiful now reigns down in her world.....tiny beads of soul searching and self love gradually anoint her poisoned skin, alerting her to life.

She is not intelligent, no.
Her strength is that she feels....she felt him touch, so effortlessly yet carefully, to reignite the soul that was decrepid and withered.

And please....don't misunderstand her.
She seeks not to hinder him.
The contrary is true.

For his gifts of wisdom, integrity and hope...

She just wants to say...

**thank you**

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© 2008 Crush Room
Published on Monday, September 1, 2008.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • Scarrzz On Wednesday, October 22, 2008, Scarrzz (235)By person wrote:

    I appreciate the way you seem to see yourself from the outside here. She... you... gave your life, your essence, to him who touched you. In giving we receive. I hope he understood the precious nature of the gift. Scholar

  • Crush Room On Tuesday, October 28, 2008, Crush Room (22)By person wrote:

    It is a bit heavy, this write...but what I love about this site is the opportunity to write for yourself...purge your thoughts and try to see some clarity. Mostly, it works for me....xx

  • Crush Room On Wednesday, September 3, 2008, Crush Room (22)By person wrote:

    Well....note to self, you know what they say? Only a mother could love that face!!!! (my attempts at humouring myself)...xx

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