An Angel Stole My Words
By Crush Room
Gifted words from you have become this seasons must-have..
Upon each meticulous thought you gave
A piece was hand-stitched into my own celestial playground.
Forming a tapestry of desire, hope and life for this fallen maiden...
Worn proudly, yet hidden from view,
Your gifts ignited dormant embers within.....
Redemption, once beyond appeal, had finally made it's debut Holding out
an extended invitation to the bosom of acceptance, forgiveness and sanctity........
Alas,
I learn....
....the gifts were sewn with brittle thread;
Before my very eyes,
Each one has fallen away...
Each silken stitch tarnished, dull, fractured.....
Each word mutated into inconspicuous, insidious lies
My tiny feet,
weighted by the litter
of crushed words that crowd my gait....
Struggle to find their way
Plucked by the fingers of the breeze and swiftly whisked away, echoes of
you haunt me........
Reality......a cold hard slap in the face as I find my words are safely
tucked away.....
.....under the wings of another.
Comments on "An Angel Stole My Words"
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On Thursday, July 10, 2008, demonofthefall
(22) wrote:
lovely
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On Monday, June 30, 2008, veingo
(526) wrote:
I really liked this one. Very impressive. Sorry it took so long to get to it but, Welcome to the vally. ^V^
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On Saturday, June 28, 2008, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
As nessa would say: Egads! "The gifts were sewn with brittle thread" and "Echoes of you haunt me" Deeply indepth. Please write on.
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On Friday, June 27, 2008, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
Great depth and such a rich use of language..I'm digging your works thus far. -Carl
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On Thursday, June 26, 2008, Scarrzz
(235) wrote:
Meanings within meanings, eloquently spoken. Hiding the pain but seeking that elusive acceptance that will not disintegrate. That was most excellent. I'm looking forward to reading more. Welcome to DP.