An Angel Stole My Words

By Crush Room


Gifted words from you have become this seasons must-have..
Upon each meticulous thought you gave
A piece was hand-stitched into my own celestial playground.

Forming a tapestry of desire, hope and life for this fallen maiden...
Worn proudly, yet hidden from view,
Your gifts ignited dormant embers within.....

Redemption, once beyond appeal, had finally made it's debut Holding out an extended invitation to the bosom of acceptance, forgiveness and sanctity........


Alas,
I learn....

....the gifts were sewn with brittle thread;

Before my very eyes,
Each one has fallen away...
Each silken stitch tarnished, dull, fractured.....
Each word mutated into inconspicuous, insidious lies

My tiny feet,
weighted by the litter
of crushed words that crowd my gait....
Struggle to find their way

Plucked by the fingers of the breeze and swiftly whisked away, echoes of you haunt me........

Reality......a cold hard slap in the face as I find my words are safely tucked away.....


.....under the wings of another.

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© 2008 Crush Room
Published on Wednesday, June 25, 2008.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • demonofthefall On Thursday, July 10, 2008, demonofthefall (22)By person wrote:

    lovely

  • veingo On Monday, June 30, 2008, veingo (533)By person wrote:

    I really liked this one. Very impressive. Sorry it took so long to get to it but, Welcome to the vally. ^V^

  • Alanarchy On Saturday, June 28, 2008, Alanarchy (1200)By person wrote:

    As nessa would say: Egads! "The gifts were sewn with brittle thread" and "Echoes of you haunt me" Deeply indepth. Please write on.

  • carlosjackal On Friday, June 27, 2008, carlosjackal (3019)By person wrote:

    Great depth and such a rich use of language..I'm digging your works thus far. -Carl

  • Scarrzz On Thursday, June 26, 2008, Scarrzz (238)By person wrote:

    Meanings within meanings, eloquently spoken. Hiding the pain but seeking that elusive acceptance that will not disintegrate. That was most excellent. I'm looking forward to reading more. Welcome to DP. Scholar

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