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....Daydreamer.......
By Crush Room
As the train meanered it's way through the quiet countryside and pulled
up for it's obligatory halt,
I stared out the window.....
Knowing it was impossible didn't stop me from thinking.....
......that I might just catch a glimpse of you.
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A former member wrote:
. . . . hope [:
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A former member wrote:
not sure what to say on this...except i always see, and feel, everywhere and i feel my own heart skip a beat at the sight.catch and throw away again and the pain and the prison is only skin......poignant at best we are.
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On Sunday, October 5, 2008, thelostmessenger
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wrote:
love to the daydreamers. you said it, and said it well.
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A former member wrote:
when all else is perephiral, and thoughts rest in calming hopes,...bringing forth a little synchronosity...lovely moments where all is not lost...
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On Wednesday, July 9, 2008, veingo
(526) wrote:
Oh, very nice the way you brought home the feeling in so few words. Well done. ^V^
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A former member wrote:
and therein lies the power of wishful thinking... you express the nuances of the mind, as if there were no limitations to the stories we'll let ourselves indulge, knowing full well their fictitious content, and yet not willing or able to deny their appeal.
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