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fractured fairy tale
By Crush Room
Remind me of the night
you held me
And that's all you did.
A vivid memory of skin on skin
Aroused by touch;
And touch alone....
I think that was the time
I lost myself...
The pebbles that
shone in the dark night
were swept
away by the driving rain....
...and now, no matter how hard I try
.. I can't find my way home.
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© 2008 Crush Room
Published on Monday, September 1, 2008.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "fractured fairy tale"
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A former member wrote:
Foreplay of the soul is so under-rated,
to put aside the physical intent and just 'be' with another, .. dun get me wrong,.. i enjoy some serial linen loven as much as the next entity but to hone in on the energy that started the revolution can bring emotion of unchartered waters, .. amalgamate the two and you got yourself something in the realm of magic.
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On Monday, September 1, 2008, freudian-slip
(239)
wrote:
the title speaks volumes
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On Monday, September 1, 2008, Kaleidoscope_Heart
(111) wrote:
This was so beautiful. It was soft, and lulling. The long lines followed by short lines gaves that quality to it. This is a peice that connects deeply, to arouse a memory, melting the heart of the reader. It's comforting, and at the same time...saddening. Hmm. Whatever the present situation, it is always lovely to know that the memories will always be preserved and untainted. :)
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On Monday, September 1, 2008, veingo
(533) wrote:
This brought back a feeling of a memorie like a warm wave over me. Well done. ^V^
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