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..days like this
By Crush Room
...and no matter the angle, the thought or the feeling that grew inside
of her
be it platonic or passionate;
her intended words die before they reach their destination.
And as she watches them fall, borne of the beauty of crystallised snowflakes....
Each one floats to its end...me.lting, dissolving into the earth.
And although she grieves for these words everyday....
...she has come to learn that some 'things' are better left unsaid
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Comments on "..days like this"
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A former member wrote:
love this,...read it the other day and it just stuck with me, so well written,..simplified understanding yet word choice creates beautiful personal impacts along the way,..read it like 10 times, jus gonna fav it,..makes it easier to find.
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On Sunday, August 17, 2008, Scarrzz
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wrote:
True, some things are better left unsaid, and some things cause pain when they are said, but are necessary to move forward... or to illustrate the need to change direction. Very good meaning in this.
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A former member wrote:
Some things are better left unsaid...but some things when left unsaid do not make it better...I really liked this.
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A former member wrote:
like blankets of emotion melting upon bare skin... yes, lovely. ~rain
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On Thursday, August 14, 2008, CharlottesWeb
(511) wrote:
This is quite lovely. Smooth and quiet, and winds the day down into a perfect solitary moment of reflection and exhalation.
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