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C.Rush Room
By Crush Room
A glutton for punishment, I choose to enter;
Voices are muted, but the global audience is deafening.
Cornered, trapped at every turn...a decisive dead end;
Trying to escape a carnival of words that don't include me.
The fireworks are extraordinary
Only this isn't my show
The flowers are blossoming to life....
But this isn't my Spring
A dawn bringing new hope
Only this isn't my day
A longing that begs to be found
But this isn't my journey...
All this and more when I open the door to my own private
C.rush Room...
Hell for the damned
Heaven for the blessed.
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© 2008 Crush Room
Comments on "C.Rush Room"
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A former member wrote:
love it...perfect,..a roadhouse for writers,..as one steps out for air,...another steps in to share...
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A former member wrote:
beautifully rendered and the images of your metaphors, even your aesthetics leads to a purgatorial descent/ascent. . .. great write. ness
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A former member wrote:
Did you mean 'cornered' at every turn? This reminds me of walking into a room with too familiar faces... smoky... with jaws grinding and glass flickering under dimmed lights... and the scratch of lighters flaring up the darkness beneath a din of pungent smoke, nervous chatter, and metal squealing a locomotive right through so many battered yesterdays.... no will stands before the train too often without falling between the tracks... very nice write, obtuse, relies on interpretation, speaks little and yet, and maybe for that reason, cannot be but heard. Welcome
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On Monday, June 30, 2008, Crush Room
(22)
wrote:
Oh and thank you for the welcome and comments (bows) xx
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On Monday, June 30, 2008, Crush Room
(22) wrote:
Thank you...yes I did mean 'cornered' ;) I agree it does rely heavily on interpretation and I guess that is what I love about posting here....it is a personal journey. The poem is about DP.
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A former member wrote:
your welcome, thanks. Interesting... C.Rush Room... a unique name.
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On Monday, June 30, 2008, veingo
(533) wrote:
Well done again. I look forward to more from you. ^V^
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On Saturday, June 28, 2008, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
Cool stuff. I really dig that middle section. Welcome.
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On Friday, June 27, 2008, carlosjackal
(3019) wrote:
Really enjoyed this one..Welcome to DP :) -Carl
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On Friday, June 27, 2008, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
sweet ...
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