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"good... holy... jiminy... this one was a thought provoking free fall of false rhythm and switchbacks that had me mesmerised through to the end, and wow what an ending. "I guess. Not yet." This is the sort of write that put ya on my faves list dude."
Posted by Sketso on "A Confession in Bright Dark." by Aleas

"had me holding my breath throughout..."
Posted by sanglante on "Remember Me This Way." by Aleas

"This shines...it stands out from the rest, and leaves a permanent mark. Gorgeous. Absolutely gorgeous in almost every way. "
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "Remember Me This Way." by Aleas

"A tour de force of intellectual sensuality - quite impressive indeed"
Posted by Riven Waker on "Remember Me This Way." by Aleas

"Congratulations you two on your win. I thought Mab and I really had ourselves something potent and lethal until I saw what we were up against. Breath taking work that harnessed a deserved win."
Posted by CjPsychotic on "Remember Me This Way." by Aleas

"Congratz you two! A well deserved victory!"
Posted by Sketso on "Remember Me This Way." by Aleas

"Thanks everyone...quite the shock for me since there were so many great pieces...Thanks Stephen for letting me step into your piece and add a bit of me...I still love this!"
Posted by Narcissa on "Remember Me This Way." by Aleas

"Yep yep yep. Rock and roll you's guys. :D"
Posted by Alanarchy on "Remember Me This Way." by Aleas

"a well deserved win indeed! *tips hat*"
Posted by Unknown on "Remember Me This Way." by Aleas

"Certainly a poem deserving of the win, congratulations you two :)"
Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on "Remember Me This Way." by Aleas

"Woah! Many thanks to all. Take a bow Narcissa!"
Posted by Aleas on "Remember Me This Way." by Aleas

"dont why why i missed this,...there was no cryptisism to de-code here for me ,..whether it be my interpretation or not i watched a man unfold from an angered pain shelter, perhaps his choice of weapon in the war of self preservation,....the beauty here for me was the setting that you started.'the mirror reference'..thats where i watched this from,...a personal thing to witness a man put up his gaurd only to watch his salt come to the surface..also: you saw this moment through with the double body movement of initial resistence "clenched fists"..where as the heart and hope of this underlying man had 'felt' if just for a moment..hence the "smile"..appreciate your willing share of this mate,..very human moment caught in mind..of me."
Posted by Unknown on "Forever and a Secret." by Aleas

"I agree fully every person you meet on your path, taking you where you're meant to be, is a person that was meant to be there at that moment in time for reasons we may never know. "
Posted by Revisable Retina on "Along the Way." by Aleas

" "Flowers in an autumn breeze As everything is sure to fade, we'll bloom forevermore." ...love this line... This read like a quiet stream forever soothing fallen rocks and tossed stones...and they will remain there but the beauty of it is that the water still flows serene..."
Posted by Narcissa on "Forever and a Secret." by Aleas

"oh my this was lovely... beautiful in feel, thought and language... flowing gently with hope, glimmering... outstanding "
Posted by NikesRain on "Forever and a Secret." by Aleas

"beautifully worked, like a silver inlaid axe to the temple"
Posted by whisperer on "Undaunted, Unwanted, and Regrettably Unnoticed." by Aleas

"The closing stanza brings this piece to a end like a door slamming. Good flow, hard to do with the subject matter--so often ends up sounding "ranty" and this is not, in any way that. "
Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "Beauty of the World." by Aleas

"i dont know what to say. i read this four times and im stil not sure i understand it all. im intrigued. i have a feeling that there are things behind the words, you know its thre but you cant really see it. idk, anyways. nice write =]"
Posted by BrokenAngel on "The Songs We Sing." by Aleas

"i really really loved this.....so provocative of internal combustive type emotional tides...and the rhtyhms and flows of it. . .. were supercedingly grand. +ness"
Posted by Unknown on "The Songs We Sing." by Aleas

"The stanza that began "Of that laughter" tore right through me as your works typically do...And though time keeps moving forward its hard not to look back."
Posted by Narcissa on "The Songs We Sing." by Aleas

"I loved it. Nice mix on the emotions. "
Posted by Unknown on "Ocean Promises." by Aleas

"Thats because he wrote it and I merely added a few words....:)"
Posted by Narcissa on "Remember Me This Way." by Aleas

"I like the begingin when you say "i was better off without it" hearing the words i love you can be so wonderful and so horrible/scary at the same time....but sometimes going back isnt the best thing in the world....this was another AMAZING one..... "
Posted by brie_leigh on "Please; Don't." by Aleas

"you really pour your soul into your work. feel free to message me sometime great mindst hink a like"
Posted by Unknown on "Godsent Goodbye." by Aleas

"Quite the team you two make. I would never be able to tell which of you wrote which piece. Lovely write."
Posted by Leith Plunkett on "Remember Me This Way." by Aleas

"This is nice. Maybe I should do something.."
Posted by Unknown on "Ocean Promises." by Aleas

"toujours....such languid beauty dripping form you both.. . ."
Posted by Unknown on "Remember Me This Way." by Aleas

"A braille reading where vision was felt,..mus be something in the air,..duets pieces are climaxing to peak proportion...certain passages were being recited as if i were in a cathedral listening to sacred to and fro's....remnant collision."
Posted by Unknown on "Remember Me This Way." by Aleas

"a great pairing of styles and talent blended seamless... the flow and emotions dance easily together from each of you... well done indeed"
Posted by NikesRain on "Remember Me This Way." by Aleas

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