Along the Way.
By Aleas
Along the way we find we're left
With only one Who
And given
no why's, we thirst
For sorrows unbounded felt here and now
Will soon be eclipsed on the final tomorrow that came today
With
peace of mind so endearing
It may cause tears
That when wiped
away
Reveal your reason, your why, and remove all fear
Along the way we find that
With the sway of the tides
Caused
by the nights eye
Although at times closed or half asleep as she
may
Will wash away even the analogies that say
"Tomorrow will
bring a better day"
And this won't soak in a beautiful waste
Along the way we find paths crossed
Hardly given a second
thought
If even graced by a first
If only given one by chance
And by chance, should the opportunity be seized
May end up as
pleasant as an autumn breeze
And so two paths crossed
Probably
thinking the same, but if not
Would you stand idle as he drifts along
the way?
Comments on "Along the Way."
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On Thursday, November 6, 2014, soul_versing
(774) wrote:
I just don't feel worthy enough to comment. My brain is still soaking it in and it's quite liberating.
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A former member wrote:
Seeing deeper into simple pleasures... You seem to be great at this. I love this. Great work. And nice pic.
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A former member wrote:
The simple pleasures in life....the special, or not so special happenings....you seem to cherish them, am I right?
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On Monday, December 28, 2009, Dilated View
(582) wrote:
Excellent flow and excellent content. I enjoyed following your thought process and how it built up a nervousness that at the end was shattered with a simple question. Very nicely done.
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On Monday, April 6, 2009, Revisable Retina
(81) wrote:
I agree fully every person you meet on your path, taking you where you're meant to be, is a person that was meant to be there at that moment in time for reasons we may never know.
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A former member wrote:
Nice flow, I liked it & can relate.
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On Tuesday, May 6, 2008, GoldenLotus
(47) wrote:
very nice!
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On Monday, May 5, 2008, Sketso
(416) wrote:
And I find that I have better questions than I have answers...
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On Friday, May 2, 2008, RubyXero
(481) wrote:
on to pt 2. really liked the 1st stanza especially.
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On Tuesday, April 29, 2008, Sparrow
(88) wrote:
Damn, indeed. This is great!
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On Tuesday, April 29, 2008, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
Wellcome to dp.. damn