Comments by All Members
- "I really love this. You try to spare them but then you think their love will be enough, but unfortunately it is they that are consumed by ur darkness . Such a familiar undoing of someone once so beautiful and vibrant "
Posted by Unknown on "Enters The Sun" by RubyXero
- "Hm. Can't say I know what to say about this poem either. Too many of those going around, or I could just be tired. Either way, The length behind this and feelings showed you were very serious."
Posted by Lux on "It Was An Honest Mistake" by RubyXero
- "there is longing and strength here at the same, a suffering but also a powerful resilience that transcends the deep empty wells of a dead relationship. "
Posted by Unknown on "The Solitary Climb" by RubyXero
- "Too bad you didn't have a chainsaw or machete in that dream, I know what I would have done to someone like him... I can just feel the deepest and darkest of disgust oozing from this. I hate it when we dream of such things... Always makes my skin crawl... "
Posted by Symbol on "Violent... sick fuck! animosity--" by RubyXero
- "Thanks :} it threw me off all day. I think that's why I chose to release it this way. It's weird I'm rarely helpless or afraid in my dreams. Usually I'm some sort of warrior... He definitely fucked me up... Apparently I'm still feeling the after effects"
Posted by RubyXero on "Violent... sick fuck! animosity--" by RubyXero
- "Kill em. to break the babies (no matter the age) arm .. rape,, death is the only solution for such creatures.. hello there you .. and i hate dreams like this i have them often.. hugs."
Posted by Devilish on "Violent... sick fuck! animosity--" by RubyXero
- "This is SO beautiful. I have to read it over ...its so good. I really could see what was happening, the feeling of "finally finished" and the rushing hands and the "cute" pill bottle.
Its a devious, tragic, love work.
You've won yourself a fan"
Posted by TornPieces on "September Suicides #1 (Call Center Violence)" by RubyXero
- "I love this, but remember darkness flees from the light... briefly kissing in the twilight... I love the dominance in your words!! "
Posted by blue angel on "Enters The Sun" by RubyXero
- "I recall a universal warning from my childhood, something along the lines of never marrying a poet, a painter, or a musician - I wonder why that was? People equating creativity perhaps with starving artists, leaving us to graze with the rest of the lowing cattle in anonymity. This was a striking piece that called to mind some of that memory, cheers Ruby (and we all thankyou for the tribute)."
Posted by dwells on "Having a Picnic With Your Mind (A Tribute to the Poet)" by RubyXero
- "Stopping to smell the roses. Choking on the fragrance of beauty and innocence. You've said a lot in just a few simple sentences. Good stuff."
Posted by Unknown on "Windermere Dreams" by RubyXero
- ""the aftertaste...
left my throat choking" - interesting picture and a great contrast to the positive scent and color. I like this one very much! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Windermere Dreams" by RubyXero
- "damn this was a lovely stroll through the suffering in a suicidal phase. ive been to this place and it was a bit hard to stomach for me. its just so fucking realistic, you did an excellent job writting this ciera! "
Posted by haunted on "September Suicides #1 (Call Center Violence)" by RubyXero
- "Too real and it sounds like the EMTs were terrified too! Macabre and menacing and I think some people might be cured after reading this personal travelogue. Seems like it always makes a mess, somehow - and the next day after the stomach pumping, is Hell on earth too. Riveting Ruby, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "September Suicides #1 (Call Center Violence)" by RubyXero
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