Star Bright (dead girl)
By cre
star light star bright
better wish and do it right
or you'll be dead before the night
~is over~
Dead little girls can't scream
And their skin turns kind of green
You know what I've seen, you know what I mean
Pretty white carpet where'd the blood go
Washed it all out with a spoon of pine-glo
Cry cause you know, nobody sees so nobody knows
Little corpse-girl with eyes so wide
I wish you didn't have to die
We coulda been friends that's why, that's why
Pretty white carpet where'd the blood go
Covered it up with fake christmas snow
Just don't look too hard no no, just don't look too close
Little dead girl you're not alone
The little bugs made you their new home
Oh don't you know they're crawlin' in your bones
Pretty white carpet all blood-stained
Pretty little girl there's no more pain
We're all the same, oh all the same.
star light star bright
too-too late and now it's night
you didn't do it right, no not right
~it's over~
Comments on "Star Bright (dead girl)"
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On Sunday, September 25, 2005, vaultgrl
(185) wrote:
wow, it's so.....so....so......sadistically beautiful....:P...great write.....
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A former member wrote:
this is sad. :( almost teared up reading it. amazing work. :)
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On Tuesday, April 1, 2003, liquid_emotion
(323) wrote:
You do a lot of little girl dead or little girl ruined sort of themes.... I like the covering it up with christmas snow. Loss of innocence
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A former member wrote:
Two words come to mind: Evilly Sadistic. Great Poem.
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A former member wrote:
cryptic.i like. a great piece.
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On Sunday, March 30, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl
(243) wrote:
wow...how the hell do you write this well? lol what is your secret? *tries to hide jealousy*
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A former member wrote:
i love this, cre! very nice job!
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A former member wrote:
awesome, you are too good cre, **claps**
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On Sunday, March 30, 2003, KittyStryker
(710) wrote:
Oh, gorgeous! Bravo, bravo, I love it cre!
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On Friday, May 23, 2003, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
wow