choke on happiness

By maddin foxxxy

May a light
keep you warm at
night
while you sleep
in the mist of cold ... .

Remember love
you made me understand
I wasn't company
and you aren't mine
to hold.

May the years
embrace all
you've dreamt
and work wonders
for you ..

Remember love
you made it clear to me
I'm not meant to fit
all the plans
you did.

And may there be laughter
everytime your lips
speak
"hi" .. .

The tear i retained

inside my eye ...

The words choked

my silence

as you meant goodbye ...

And yet ...

I wish you every
sight of ocean
blue .. .

Remember love?

That's how much

I

loved

you

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© 2006 maddin foxxxy
Published on Saturday, January 28, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • empty_remains On Thursday, November 6, 2014, empty_remains (2)By person wrote:

    sadly beautiful. I'm there myself thank you for sharing

  • ArcticWolf999 On Sunday, June 26, 2011, ArcticWolf999 (53)By person wrote:

    Such emotion enstilled within this. Beautiful write.

  • A former member wrote: beautifully sad, your words touched my heart in this

  • TaintedButterfly On Sunday, October 22, 2006, TaintedButterfly (653)By person wrote:

    This was tragically beautiful and hit home, for I know that all too well! Well done. Julia~

  • Dissolving Poet On Friday, April 28, 2006, Dissolving Poet (560)By person wrote:

    I loved your voice in this, the sorrow that sang to my heart

  • A former member wrote: very well crafted, very nice form,love the simplicity (yet with deep meaning)at the end.Represents the feeling when someone truly cares for a person.

  • A former member wrote: I rather liked this, great job on an old subject. ~Lost~

  • darkdesires On Saturday, January 28, 2006, darkdesires (139)By person wrote:

    This is incredible. Its must be hard how you can maintain such thoughts and feelings after such pain. I absolutely love this.

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