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i adore...
By urbanhumility
i Adore....
i Adore you
i Adore you my first love...
You came my way .....brightened my day....with your sweet sweet smile...
My first kiss i can still taste...
i thank you for my "rose colored vision"
You have passed..... my love for you has not....
i have one Adoration, one infinite moment i Adore...
my Adoration is endless...
May you rest in my heart...
i Adore you... my first love.........
Anthony Risica 1971-1994
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© 2005 urbanhumility
Published on Monday, December 5, 2005.
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On Thursday, May 13, 2010, musicalsuicide
(58)
wrote:
great work. its true for all first loves.......*sigh*
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On Tuesday, May 19, 2009, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
To adore is such a beautiful emotion...as in your own words "you wear it well" incredible.
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On Tuesday, June 24, 2008, Scarrzz
(235) wrote:
Adore is indeed the right word. Adorations is beyond Passion, Beyond Love even... or rather it is the purest form of Love. The love that flows from within no matter what the cost and never dries up. I could wish that the world were made differently, in such a fashion that we would always be able to be with the ones we adore.
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On Friday, May 9, 2008, LiP Stiches
(42) wrote:
i feel the passion...the longing.....nice job
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On Monday, August 13, 2007, Err0r
(358) wrote:
I'm not sure I understand the whole story hun, but just from these few words I can sense so much passion and love. Beautifully touching.
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On Thursday, April 12, 2007, Dark Moon
(7) wrote:
Beautiful and so full of love....Thank you for shareing a part of you.
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A former member wrote:
I love the part about your rose colored vision.
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On Thursday, February 15, 2007, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
to adore...is to be alive. te adoro.
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On Thursday, January 18, 2007, carlosjackal
(2787) wrote:
Beautiful in its simplicity and sincerity, I genuinely was touched and even more so when I saw the dedication at the very bottom.
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On Sunday, December 17, 2006, Tonights Decision
(132) wrote:
this is... pure serenity...
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On Tuesday, December 5, 2006, Crysa
(33) wrote:
You have a different way of writing, it intrigues me, and I feel as if I'm eavesdropping because your poems are like secret, continuous thoughts that aren't meant for me to hear.
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A former member wrote:
Feel.
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A former member wrote:
I fell nothing but life in this write. I am so sorry for your loss.
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On Friday, September 29, 2006, flying_fox
(571) wrote:
This is simply beautiful. Your words are graceful and elegant and pure. Very touching indeed.
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On Tuesday, September 26, 2006, Bluegirl
(177) wrote:
This is so sweet and honest. :) A lovely contribution.
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A former member wrote:
this... is so lovely, it makes me cry..
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On Sunday, April 2, 2006, Sin
(1135) wrote:
such touching sentiment...may we all hold those first bittersweet moments as close to our hearts as you do yours ~kristy
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On Wednesday, February 15, 2006, Err0r
(358) wrote:
So powerful and thoughtful. I could almost taste all of the love in this serene write. I don't think I could ever convey such emotion. Well written. =)
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A former member wrote:
This is so beautiful in its completeness and the feeling after is utterly bittersweet. Thanks for sharing a glimpse into your heart. ~Lost~
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On Monday, January 16, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(653) wrote:
I love this piece, and read it at least once a day! Julia~
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A former member wrote:
Wow. Beautiful, the only thing I can say is that I humbly bow to these feelings. ~Ship
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On Tuesday, December 13, 2005, TaintedButterfly
(653) wrote:
This is beautiful!
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On Tuesday, December 6, 2005, OLd SouL
(717) wrote:
the sun hasn't even broke the horizon yet today and I've already got my first ray of sunshine. Thanks. :::OLdie
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On Monday, December 5, 2005, sIo
(898) wrote:
what i got from this i cannot thank you enough. this was pure beauty....
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