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Deadly Night
By cre
Dark of night
And candlelight
Take my heart
Kill my might
Dead of night
The emphasis
Is on dead
I promise this
Darkness falls
Shadowed gloom
Fucked up nightmare
Embrace doom
Eyes reflect
Candleglow
What I fear
What I know
I am gone
Ghosts don't feel
Never cry
Nothing's real
No more darkness
No more light
Just remnants of
A deadly night.
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Copyright 2003 cre
Published on Friday, March 7, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Deadly Night"
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On Sunday, June 26, 2005, SorrowSoul
(54)
wrote:
The flow of this write is dark and real. Very good work.
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A former member wrote:
pure lonliness
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A former member wrote:
:)
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A former member wrote:
that was beautifully written, maybe even the best one i read from you.
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A former member wrote:
Great poem cre. I agree with Fish, poems that use candle light give it even more emotion
~~~**~~~Ashley~~~**~~~
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A former member wrote:
this is a wonderful write. your imagery is excellent. keep up the good work.
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On Saturday, March 8, 2003, liquid_emotion
(323) wrote:
Fish says what i want to when he gets to poems first... I hate that.
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A former member wrote:
just one more day earlier and u wudda got to say what you want *tisk tisk tisk*
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A former member wrote:
top nothch, work, as it always is...Great job...
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On Friday, March 7, 2003, Ravenblade
(307) wrote:
Awesome poem, probably one of the best I've read in a while. I love the image that you portray in the candle light, and how you establish a new precept of darkness among it.
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On Friday, March 7, 2003, Jonas
(715) wrote:
i love poems that use candle light imagery aptly... you did that and i see sparkling eyes looking with intensity out of the shade of a silouette
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A former member wrote:
Jane, you have taken my heart and engulfed it once again in your poems Lol -PoP RoXx n KoKe-
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