Our Love

By GreekPhilosopher

My love for you is milk.
Pity, then, that you're lactose intolerant.
Your love for me is a sweater.
Damn, it's a sunny day.
My love for you is a market place.
But you're agoraphobic.
Your love for me is ice.
But, baby, I'm a pyromaniac.

Our Love Is Great.
But It'll Never Work.
Maybe.

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Published on Tuesday, March 22, 2005. Filed under: "Poetry"

Awards

June 27th, 2011

Comments on "Our Love"

On Wednesday, November 2, 2011, Silver Spectre (95) wrote:

Maybe, it is an art lost with us!!! Ever feel like it isn't as it was, and will never be again? Maybe I have drank too much, but, how I love the Milk!
On Monday, June 27, 2011, Nameless Pariah (126) wrote:

Wow. This is probably the best love poem I've ever read.
A former member wrote: Oh, this poem is really amazing!! I like it a lot. But me, I don't know why, but I chuckled. Howevever, this is truly brilliant! :D -Zarah!
On Monday, June 27, 2011, punk mc cool (74) wrote:

i like the way you put it all together, milk ,sweater, they mean a lot more to me now ;P
On Saturday, October 9, 2010, carlosjackal (2787) wrote:

It's always those, 'What if''s' that fuck things up when really circumstances should be grabbed by the collar and given a try. Brilliant piece.
A former member wrote: this is so great. oh i know it to well, i love it. ^_^
On Thursday, August 31, 2006, sixsixnine (476) wrote:

fuck yeah! it's genius!
A former member wrote: Haha. Don't they say opposites attract? I guess you'll find out. So very well done. Charming, even.
On Saturday, January 7, 2006, TheSi|entEnigma (2) wrote:

How beautifully alternative. =)
On Monday, November 7, 2005, urbanhumility (1158) wrote:

love to hate? hate to love? well done Greek......................urban
On Wednesday, March 30, 2005, Delphoid-Q (213) wrote:

Hehehe. She still teasing then? Anyhoo, i loved the poem; full of Gumpisms, those concise, simple statements that convey what most words cannot. Good to see one from you again.
On Tuesday, March 22, 2005, AniDayz (812) wrote:

damn this is so great...shit...im all smiling at this,the raw intelligence...beaming fucking piece of art...
On Tuesday, March 22, 2005, Dancing_Monkey (1228) wrote:

Your the man Greek ... I love your touch of perfection.
A former member wrote: yeah i know how this feels, like ur complete opposites but who knows..."maybe"...great write!
On Tuesday, March 22, 2005, happilydepressed (400) wrote:

great write, doesn't seem like it would work out