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Our Love
By GreekPhilosopher
My love for you is milk.
Pity, then, that you're lactose intolerant.
Your love for me is a sweater.
Damn, it's a sunny day.
My love for you is a market place.
But you're agoraphobic.
Your love for me is ice.
But, baby, I'm a pyromaniac.
Our Love Is Great.
But It'll Never Work.
Maybe.
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Copyright 2005 GreekPhilosopher
Published on Tuesday, March 22, 2005.
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On Wednesday, November 2, 2011, Silver Spectre
(90)
wrote:
Maybe, it is an art lost with us!!! Ever feel like it isn't as it was, and will never be again? Maybe I have drank too much, but, how I love the Milk!
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On Monday, June 27, 2011, Nameless Pariah
(126) wrote:
Wow. This is probably the best love poem I've ever read.
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A former member wrote:
Oh, this poem is really amazing!! I like it a lot. But me, I don't know why, but I chuckled. Howevever, this is truly brilliant! :D -Zarah!
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On Monday, June 27, 2011, punk mc cool
(75) wrote:
i like the way you put it all together, milk ,sweater, they mean a lot more to me now ;P
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On Saturday, October 9, 2010, carlosjackal
(3015) wrote:
It's always those, 'What if''s' that fuck things up when really circumstances should be grabbed by the collar and given a try. Brilliant piece.
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A former member wrote:
this is so great. oh i know it to well, i love it. ^_^
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On Thursday, August 31, 2006, sixsixnine
(477) wrote:
fuck yeah! it's genius!
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A former member wrote:
Haha. Don't they say opposites attract? I guess you'll find out. So very well done. Charming, even.
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On Saturday, January 7, 2006, TheSi|entEnigma
(2) wrote:
How beautifully alternative. =)
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On Monday, November 7, 2005, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
love to hate? hate to love? well done Greek......................urban
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On Wednesday, March 30, 2005, Delphoid-Q
(213) wrote:
Hehehe. She still teasing then? Anyhoo, i loved the poem; full of Gumpisms, those concise, simple statements that convey what most words cannot. Good to see one from you again.
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On Tuesday, March 22, 2005, AniDayz
(820) wrote:
damn this is so great...shit...im all smiling at this,the raw intelligence...beaming fucking piece of art...
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On Tuesday, March 22, 2005, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
Your the man Greek ... I love your touch of perfection.
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A former member wrote:
yeah i know how this feels, like ur complete opposites but who knows..."maybe"...great write!
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On Tuesday, March 22, 2005, happilydepressed
(409) wrote:
great write, doesn't seem like it would work out
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