Have You Ever Felt?
By SnowQueen
Have you ever felt...
A pressure all around you that stopped you from moving?
That no matter how hard you tried to win you'd always end up losing?
That you were a fallen rose pedal- beautiful but rotting away?
The immense weight on your heart burdening you night and day?
The fear of falling to your death only to find yourself safe in bed?
The horrible regret sink in over what you wish you hadn't said?
Pushed to the point where you completely lost control?
Terrified of facing the truth when all your lies take their toll?
So in love with a person that your heart won't let you forget?
Terrified and confused, waking up in a cold sweat?
That you hurt someone to the point that sorry just wouldn't do?
That maybe it wasn't everyone else, maybe the problem was you?
That you would always fail and there was no point in trying?
That everyone was content and you were always crying?
That everyone was miserable and you were to blame?
Desperate for change in a world that stays the same?
So right then have someone prove you wrong?
So weak inside then pretending to be strong?
Suicidal? Truly believing that death would end you pain.
The buildup of tears in your eyes ready to pour like rain?
The sensations that awaken you from your life as a wooden doll?
I often wonder with the way you treat me... do you feel at all?
Comments on "Have You Ever Felt?"
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A former member wrote:
I honestly am in awe, amazing , amazing, amazing and right to the point! I love it! :D
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A former member wrote:
no words... its good
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A former member wrote:
truly wonderous. one of my ultimate faves. i relate so much and the ending is just amazing. itz breathtaking.
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On Friday, March 5, 2004, BoldSolitude
(214) wrote:
Awesome, I can totally relate especially to "That maybe it wasn't everyone else, maybe the problem was you
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On Thursday, January 22, 2004, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
Wonderful! This is great, the last line brings it all together.
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A former member wrote:
...Great write......
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On Friday, March 5, 2004, Necromancer
(71) wrote:
-great write is an understatement. it was completely awsome. every line built off of the others building depth and then summing it all up with one last line
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On Saturday, December 13, 2003, Jaded Jezzabelle
(328) wrote:
all I can say is...damn....damn...
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On Sunday, September 28, 2003, GreekPhilosopher
(156) wrote:
I Am Extremely Glad That I Stumbled Upon This Masterpeice. I Feel Awkward In That You Hit The Nail On The Head. I Am Amazed At Your Insight. A True Master You Are. It Is Simply Amazing. GPhD.
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On Sunday, September 28, 2003, GreekPhilosopher
(156) wrote:
On The Books! GPhD.
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On Wednesday, August 20, 2003, The Fallen Angel
(234) wrote:
It's like a survey
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On Wednesday, August 20, 2003, _Andrew_
(245) wrote:
i really liked it, thought it was a comercial ad at first :D, turned out awesome tho, thx *~*aNDReW*~*
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On Saturday, July 12, 2003, Blood of Winter
(296) wrote:
good write, true conveyence of the feels felt.
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On Wednesday, July 9, 2003, Stranger
(263) wrote:
Brilliant. This was masterfully crafted. Each line a little lead weight around our neck, until we are finally pushed off the bridge. Always love reading something new from you.
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A former member wrote:
wow....i like. i totally feel that way right now...