do you?

By Abbyernathie

When the rain falls,
Do you take the time
To drink from the
Crying sky?
When the sun shines,
Have you ever noticed
That the shadows
Seem to hide?
When the stars rise
And the moon shines bright,
Do you look to the heavens
For answers?
When life goes by,
Do you take the time
To slow right down
And live it?
Or do you just
Move at your own pace
And expect that
Time will wait?

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Copyright 2003 Abbyernathie
Published on Thursday, August 7, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Dreaming in Stanzas On Tuesday, February 14, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas (293)By person wrote:

    It was all great but the first four lines? Effing genius.

  • Blinded_Tiger On Saturday, August 30, 2003, Blinded_Tiger (518)By person wrote:

    *cries* I dont know .... But I love your work *running away crying* Tiger

  • Abbyernathie On Monday, August 11, 2003, Abbyernathie (61)By person wrote:

    thanks GPhD

  • GreekPhilosopher On Saturday, August 16, 2003, GreekPhilosopher (156)By person wrote:

    No, No, No... Thank You! GPhD.

  • Six-Out On Saturday, August 16, 2003, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    What about me?

  • GreekPhilosopher On Friday, August 29, 2003, GreekPhilosopher (156)By person wrote:

    Thank You Too (?)

  • GreekPhilosopher On Monday, August 11, 2003, GreekPhilosopher (156)By person wrote:

    This Is Greatness In Print. And Its On The Books. Thanks For Sharing This Great Peice Of Work With Us! GPhD.

  • GreekPhilosopher On Monday, August 11, 2003, GreekPhilosopher (156)By person wrote:

    "Drink From The Crying Sky"... Could You Be ANY Greater? GPhD.

  • The Fallen Angel On Monday, August 11, 2003, The Fallen Angel (234)By person wrote:

    I like this one...ppl need live for the moment...it's now or never

  • aNaRcHyPoEt On Friday, August 8, 2003, aNaRcHyPoEt (24)By person wrote:

    i dont know...i know wheni am around someone the world (and time) seems to stop. But then again i am off in my own little world so ignore me. Great job. ~ap

  • Aurora_Light On Thursday, August 7, 2003, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    time doesnt wait for anyone. nice write.

  • Rebel_Angel On Friday, August 8, 2003, Rebel_Angel (321)By person wrote:

    I agree time doesn't wait for anyone! Expecally when your having a good time ( it seems to go FASTER!)...lol

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