Boyhood
By Delphoid-Q
Flitting over grassy knolls, sun bathing their innocent faces, care left
behind with the wind, they run.
Through woods; through cool, splashing streams:
Sprays of water, sun dappled, caress flushed, sweaty faces with cool mothers'
hands.
They run to nowhere - from nothing.
They run, for in running they comprehend.
They run for life is freedom unburdened, untamed by an adult's view:
Nothing considered, nothing in doubt.
Over puddles and through shady eucalyptus the boys race,
Matched stride for stride, breath for breath, crunching twigs beneath school-shoe
fettered feet.
Each trying to prevail - neither desiring it to be so.
Each finding solace in the sweet, silent singing of laboured muscles and
mutual strength.
Connected through motion - brothers in soul if not in blood - the boys
run.
If one should stumble, the other will slow.
Should one misstep, the other would know.
And through this silent bond the boys ask, "When?
When should we stop running and become men."
*Dedicated to my best friend: I hope I have captured something of what
we shared and still do share, though metaphor is so inadequate.*
*For Chris, the infamous GreekPhilosopher*
See also: "A Brief History In Time: Greek & Delph (A Story Of Friendship)"
by GreekPhilosopher.
Comments on "Boyhood"
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On Saturday, May 15, 2004, aXe FactoR
(333) wrote:
very vivid and beautifully written. :)
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On Friday, November 14, 2003, sole
(93) wrote:
I really love this poem, it brings back so many memories of childhood friendships.
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A former member wrote:
Ahh the way you wrote this was very cool. A coming of age write that was written in an intelligent way. Very well done. ~Urban Shipwreck~
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On Sunday, October 12, 2003, Drea
(1388) wrote:
you have made this words leap off the screen and form vivid images in my mind. wonderful..~Drea~
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On Tuesday, September 9, 2003, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
you have captured the whole sum my friend, truly you have done well.........urban
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On Monday, August 11, 2003, GreekPhilosopher
(156) wrote:
Vre... Malaka... Where Do You Come Up With These Pictures... Always Put A Smile On My Face... :)GPhD.
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On Wednesday, August 6, 2003, Loneal
(86) wrote:
Amazing ... you have a way of writing that pulls the audience into the world you create ... I love it! =)
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On Tuesday, August 5, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
Wonderful piece! You really captured a fabulous timeless moment. Ciao, T/S
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On Sunday, July 27, 2003, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
:O) i feel happy.. nice work..
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On Saturday, July 26, 2003, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
great write hope the 2 of u are friends forever
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On Saturday, July 26, 2003, GreekPhilosopher
(156) wrote:
Costa Boet... Its A New Era And EveryDay I Think Of Our Trials And Tribulations. A Tribute. The Last Stanza Is Especially Meaningful. I Got Every Word, Every Suggestion, Every Intention.
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On Saturday, July 26, 2003, GreekPhilosopher
(156) wrote:
If The World Knew It Would Be A Better Place, It Sums Up "Boyhood" Like I Can Imagine It, And Like I'm Sure A Select Few Can Too.
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On Saturday, July 26, 2003, GreekPhilosopher
(156) wrote:
Greatness Of Character Comes From Earlier Experiences. Go For The Gold, And Never Look Back, never Settle For Anything Else. Destiny Has Its Maleable Ways... And Together We Moulded Our History And Set Our Path To Greatness! GPhD.
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On Saturday, July 26, 2003, Delphoid-Q
(213) wrote:
A Toast to us and to greatness!
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On Saturday, July 26, 2003, Clementine
(121) wrote:
they said i may never walk again, but now i live on the moon