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Marb Reds and Fireflies
By hate_doll
The dog tries to eat
A stow-away cricket
As I ignite fireflies
On my tongue
It's lightning in your eyes
When I tell you
We'll see it all
Plans are
Unnecessary
Just like
The purple boas fluttering
Over my beaded smile
Cheshire grin, half-missing
I'm scanning
Infomercials
And cheap
Cigarette burned
Late-night porn on
The superhighway
Of your spine
It's nights like these
You pray you'll remember
In the morning
...whytt*04
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Copyright 2004 hate_doll
Published on Tuesday, August 31, 2004.
Filed under:
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Comments on "Marb Reds and Fireflies"
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On Saturday, February 2, 2013, Jonas
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wrote:
nothing constructive other than to let you know i loved the words.
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On Monday, November 12, 2007, carlosjackal
(3011) wrote:
Mesmerising =) -Carl
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On Sunday, November 14, 2004, BeautifulCalamity
(428) wrote:
nice ending, some beautiful imagery.. studded with words that were perfectly placed almost by chance but by choice... lovely write.
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On Sunday, November 14, 2004, Loserland
(113) wrote:
sweet, simple, and as always, damn good
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On Sunday, October 10, 2004, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
Good one! Love the ending! Ciao, T/S
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On Sunday, September 26, 2004, xDeAthxPerCepTioNxReaLiTyx
(36) wrote:
You took me to my past, a place where I could relax and not worry. Its just the little things that count in life. The smallest little memory could be the best one. I love your work.
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On Friday, September 17, 2004, Railway_Butterfly
(354) wrote:
...how the hell did I miss this?The imagery in this was remarkable...'As I ignite fireflies on my tongue It's lightining in your eyes when I tell you we'll see it all'..this definately has to be one of my faves of yours...Absolutly great..Butterfly..xxx..
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On Wednesday, September 15, 2004, Blood of Winter
(296) wrote:
Like a highspeed acid trip...
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On Thursday, September 9, 2004, Zhee
(529) wrote:
excellent imagery.. i loved it!
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On Friday, September 3, 2004, Zara Synn
(57) wrote:
I love the way in which you choose to describe things, i've always been a fan of this style. Very great peice.
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On Thursday, September 2, 2004, Lynaes
(859) wrote:
Wow, this is so beautifully warped and abstract.. I gotta say one of my favourites that I've read of yours. it's abstract, yet wonderfully real, especially because of the last three lines, it's like you see the full picutre. Amazing work here.
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On Tuesday, August 31, 2004, Anth
(1133) wrote:
such uniqely fascinating imagery and style,excellent work
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