.... i believe ...
By KittyStryker
my god
you make me
religious
between these sheets
i come up
with the names of saints
i never knew
and icons
i never
believed in
i was a skeptic
an atheist
in love
but you
you
cleanse my past with kisses
and sanctify my skin
as hallowed ground
leaving behind
a trail of worship
the wall
near my bed
shows traces
of what i've come
to consider
a miracle
you
are my dark skinned angel
come to claim
what has been offered you
i
am an alter
i give you
what i have
battered pieces of what was once
i display my heart
as yours
for the taking
one
sweet
sinful
kiss
and i know
my sacrifice
has been accepted
and i
i
have been saved
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Copyright 2004 Bast
Published on Monday, June 14, 2004.
Filed under:
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A former member wrote:
'i
am an alter
i give you
what i have
battered pieces of what was once' This is a lovely, softbrutal piece w/ shadows on roads behind& ahead; what breathing can do to suffocating; nothing can stop you now...well done.
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On Monday, June 14, 2004, glasshouse
(530) wrote:
What a beautiful metaphor... though it seems so real it can hardly be considered as such. You've done it again... amazed me. Great work. -Glass
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A former member wrote:
I yearn for this, so bad.
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On Monday, June 14, 2004, Lynaes
(854) wrote:
Wonderful use of metaphor and word play, it really drew the emotions and the effect of them into you. I particularly liked "i am an alter i give you what i have". Stunning work, perfectly worded.
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On Monday, June 14, 2004, murder_in_clubland
(384) wrote:
wow,your amazing....gorgeous~ss
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On Monday, June 14, 2004, worm
(1149) wrote:
I believe I just may have become a believer! a nice touch to this one!