haunted
By KittyStryker
there is a time of night
a secret
and dreadful
time of night
when even vampires
hide
within the shadows
werewolves
huddle close
to their pack
and demons
flee
to the light of hell's flames
Cerebus
dares not
bare his fangs
but whimpers
and seeks out the hand of Hades
Kali shivers
and wraps around her
a cloak
of men's skin
even Satan
cannot bear it
and turns
away
only i remain
beyond reason
beyond fear
the mad
have nothing
to be afraid of
ours
is a world
of darkness
only found
within the screams
and void
of the mind
ours
is a world
of evil beyond measure
and tears
beyond counting
terror you cannot escape
for it hides
in the labyrinth
of your nightmares
there is a time of night
when insanity
becomes
reality
and even death
longs
for the reassurance
in a comforting hand
do not seek
sanctuary
there is
no
mercy
here
Comments on "haunted"
-
A former member wrote:
wow...this gave me the chills...good write
-
On Thursday, June 3, 2004, Mademoiselle_Minx
(108) wrote:
*year ago...I broke away from him luckily, and hopefully you can breakaway from whatever keeps you feeling like this...
-
On Thursday, June 3, 2004, Mademoiselle_Minx
(108) wrote:
Kitty...why are you bitter at yourself?You know its strange..I've been reading your works for about a year now+its like ive watched everything your hearts been through.I first started reading your works because your words related to my situation a year ag
-
On Wednesday, June 2, 2004, aXe FactoR
(333) wrote:
*gives a comforting hug* r u feeling sad now?cos i read ya pieces & they seem to scream out pain,& u expressed it so well,i got hooked reading them.u really have the dual capabilities of dawning beauty & dark murder.
-
On Wednesday, June 2, 2004, KittyStryker
(710) wrote:
sad.... yeah... in the bitter sort of way. bitter at myself, mostly.
-
On Tuesday, June 1, 2004, Neith
(21) wrote:
this is great...reminds me of a dream i've had...i love a challenge of imagination :)~shy vampire
-
On Tuesday, June 1, 2004, Alacer_Cogitatus
(140) wrote:
.....awesome. i loved it! keep em coming! A_C
-
On Tuesday, June 1, 2004, Railway_Butterfly
(353) wrote:
...for it hides in th labyrinth of your nightmares'..great wor..Butterfly..xxx...
-
On Tuesday, June 1, 2004, Railway_Butterfly
(353) wrote:
Oh...I love it,I miss reading dark writing like this...makes me think.'Ours is a world beyond measure and tears beyond counting terror you cannot escape...
-
A former member wrote:
I like...sorry, generic comment, I know...
-
On Tuesday, June 1, 2004, MGood
(60) wrote:
nice work!!
-
On Tuesday, June 1, 2004, murder_in_clubland
(384) wrote:
wow this is beautiful it made me shiver and yet it speaks only the truth i love this...the title fits it well and i like your imagery and description~ss