almost

By KittyStryker

al
..
...
..
most



i see

your smile

lightly
touch

your
eyes


al
..
...
..
most






i feel your breath

-brief-

against my
skin


al
..
...
..
most


i reach
out

fingers

barely

touch




al
..
...
..
most



you leave me
in my
dreamscape

aching

leave me

al
..
...
..
most






almost




wanting


you


back

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Copyright 2004 Bast
Published on Sunday, May 30, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • cre On Thursday, September 9, 2004, cre (410)By person wrote:

    This is so well-done that I swear I can hear you speaking it . . it leapt out at me so quietly and powerfully . . more of an experience than simply something read. I miss you.

  • KittyStryker On Friday, September 10, 2004, KittyStryker (710)By person wrote:

    cre, i miss you too. oh so much.

  • Dayer On Wednesday, September 8, 2004, Dayer (162)By person wrote:

    wow this is an anazing write

  • A former member wrote: Oh god, Kitty...this is breathtaking...it's quivering with emotion, so lovely. *quickly adds to favorites*

  • murder_in_clubland On Sunday, May 30, 2004, murder_in_clubland (384)By person wrote:

    w0w. . . this is wow...very intense i love this. i like how you set it up too ~ss


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