Now I lay me...

By Dommi

Now I lay me down to sleep
I pray you'll hold me as I weep
A dream that I've tried hard to keep
From fading from my skull

In my thoughts I'm not the same
I change behind undying names
Writing will forever tame
The wild stars inside

If I could just try to break through
And reach my hand out to touch you
I'd remember skies of blue
And who I was before

But strings of veins hold me in place
As tears of black fall from my face
It's you I can never replace
As I crumble to my floor

A mass of sobbing cut-up flesh
Set apart from all the rest
Swallowed by my lonliness
Within my carbon walls

My only warmth is in my cage
I spill my blood out on the page
It speaks of all I cannot say
My sweetest wine of words

So now I lay me down to cry
A mind curls up to slowly die
Another day has passed me by
And all the gates are locked...

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Copyright 2004 Dommi Of Baphomet
Published on Saturday, May 22, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • drasticdaydreams On Wednesday, October 22, 2014, drasticdaydreams (55)By person wrote:

    Love the second stanza particularly. And the last line was a beautiful finish. Melancholic. Perfect rhythm.

  • Star On Sunday, February 10, 2013, Star (879)By person wrote:

    hauntingly beautiful. i love the lullaby vibe in this.. (:

  • Devilish On Sunday, February 10, 2013, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Absolutely perfect miss.. Scholar

  • MorganaRose On Friday, November 2, 2012, MorganaRose (75)By person wrote:

    A great write....haunting lullaby...Thanks for sharing!~

  • A former member wrote: You've always developed a careful balance between structure, form, and content, subject.... smoothly you blend these into classical verses of contemporary pain... very well done, ms dom *bows before the dominatrix*

  • Rowan On Thursday, February 25, 2010, Rowan (197)By person wrote:

    Wow. Simply amazing.

  • Wiccad On Saturday, January 23, 2010, Wiccad (124)By person wrote:

    Every word screams to me and through me..........loved it.

  • Dilated View On Thursday, December 31, 2009, Dilated View (582)By person wrote:

    This made my heart hurt. The second to last stanza was my favorite but well crafted all around. Write on :)

  • Circe Avalon On Monday, March 17, 2008, Circe Avalon (115)By person wrote:

    I love how everything flows so well. Very good work a masterpiece!

  • Sketso On Thursday, August 30, 2007, Sketso (416)By person wrote:

    ...by my own steady hands. Interesting.

  • A former member wrote: holy cow this is awsome and i fucking loovvee it..thanks for writing it~Amanda~

  • A former member wrote: this is amazing

  • A former member wrote: Well I've checked out quite a few of your writing and I must say: "I Like ... a lot" I'll be sure to return, you are inspirational. THNX again. Moptzar.

  • A former member wrote: beautiful

  • xserratedsoulx On Saturday, February 25, 2006, xserratedsoulx (212)By person wrote:

    thank you for writing this!!!! ~lauren~

  • xserratedsoulx On Saturday, February 25, 2006, xserratedsoulx (212)By person wrote:

    words fail me...it steals my breath... "But strings of veins hold me in place As tears of black fall from my face" "my sweetest wine of words" *shivers* ~lauren~

  • A former member wrote: from the inside......sorry the poem made me do it! i wouldn't have said it otherwise :) i love this piece

  • xserratedsoulx On Thursday, February 9, 2006, xserratedsoulx (212)By person wrote:

    ps--bookmarked it! ~lauren~

  • xserratedsoulx On Thursday, February 9, 2006, xserratedsoulx (212)By person wrote:

    amazing. everything i could ever hope to write. ~lauren~

  • A former member wrote: wow i loved it

  • A former member wrote: Its so sad, yet so beatiful

  • Soulfire On Wednesday, June 1, 2005, Soulfire (96)By person wrote:

    So sad...but this fits me perfectly today. Thank you.

  • peril_notion On Monday, May 23, 2005, peril_notion (87)By person wrote:

    I love this... nicely done. ~Heather

  • Serenity On Monday, May 23, 2005, Serenity (469)By person wrote:

    This is beautiful.

  • A former member wrote: this is an amazing write!~nrk~

  • Sticky Kitty On Sunday, February 6, 2005, Sticky Kitty (241)By person wrote:

    nice rhyming scheme -kitty

  • Alacer_Cogitatus On Saturday, February 5, 2005, Alacer_Cogitatus (140)By person wrote:

    verry awesome. A_C

  • LovelyAssassinx On Sunday, January 30, 2005, LovelyAssassinx (151)By person wrote:

    I love this write so much. *faves it*~Unlucky

  • island warrior On Friday, January 28, 2005, island warrior (210)By person wrote:

    Totally awesome.

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