Hunting

By SGT Bloth

I think I'll hunt along the Im Jin river
only old men fish
where young girls shiver
I'll charm one or maybe two
and take them walking for a block or two
untill in a back alley in Seoul, we stop our feet
and I settle into them for something too eat
and take them back to the Im Jin river
where back to dust thier flesh I deliver

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Copyright 2004 Bloth Andii
Published on Saturday, January 31, 2004.     Filed under: "Fantasy" and "Poetry"
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  • Chimauron On Thursday, February 14, 2008, Chimauron (87)By person wrote:

    yeesh... talk about a walk down memory lane. Minus the blood sucking and body disposal and all... I likes it!

  • A former member wrote: perversely delicious.

  • SGT Bloth On Monday, February 11, 2008, SGT Bloth (163)By person wrote:

    He he as Am I

  • Mute Serenade On Monday, May 17, 2004, Mute Serenade (445)By person wrote:

    has a certain element of skipping so pleasently... a bit of a tra la la to it.... awesome. Sue

  • Seraphic On Friday, February 13, 2004, Seraphic (209)By person wrote:

    Twisted, yes...and a tad disturbing, it seems so sinister and justified in its own, I like it very much *~seraph~*

  • SilentStalker On Tuesday, February 3, 2004, SilentStalker (1067)By person wrote:

    ...twisted, yet humorous...I like this... -Darun Scholar


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