Finding A Parallel Shadow

By CharlottesWeb

Away with you I sing my grace

While we dance to a happier place

One flew over, and one flew under

I stayed behind, tied to my wonder

Give me your wish, and dance just a bit

Cause together, so lonely and cold we sit

I can’t give you a cause, nor give a dream

But, perhaps, just a peak behind the seam

So just take my hand, and we’ll hide away

We won’t open up, no matter what they say

Away together we’ll sing our grace

While we dance to our happier place

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Published on Wednesday, October 29, 2003. Filed under: "Poetry"

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Comments on "Finding A Parallel Shadow"

On Monday, December 1, 2014, TropicalSnowstorm (1580) wrote:

Congrats on POTD - dance on my friend! Ciao, T/S
On Friday, December 31, 2004, Anth (1126) wrote:

such a wonderfull poem,enchanting and delicate,perfectly written
On Monday, March 29, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (467) wrote:

and may you enjoy your happier grace
On Wednesday, November 5, 2003, Blinded_Tiger (518) wrote:

Cre said it perfectly. But maybe I should add that I relate to it, and I think we are trying to hit the same thing in poetry. If we where to use this as the example. Ehem... yes so that makes it realy hard to comment on. I realy enjoyed this. Tiger
On Saturday, November 1, 2003, urbanhumility (1158) wrote:

a personal wish, well versed, placed perfectly within prose......well done well spoken........
A former member wrote: Reminds me of being a child again and being carefree and just going with the flow of things while the world rushes around you. Very beautiful and very well written. ~Urban Shipwreck~
On Wednesday, October 29, 2003, yslehc (334) wrote:

yes this does have a nice flow i like it..good write
A former member wrote: love? well well u express it on a good way.
A former member wrote: That's what I was thinking exactly. It flows together so well. Excellent JM.
On Wednesday, October 29, 2003, cre (410) wrote:

Ohhh I love this! It seems enchanted . . like a spell to be spoken that will accompany you to a better place and time . . like, just close your eyes and be transported . . it imparted some peace to me. Great . .