a lipstick-shade away from dead
By Taunting The Reaper
you're a lipstick-shade away from dead
in the final balance
you've spent too much time obsessing
over a pixel
and you're missing the bigger picture
men are tragically curious dogs
full of appetite
and bark
and once in a while clever
but rarely so loyal
so now what?
who are you carrying all those bricks for?
self pity is almost cute when you mean it
but when you mean it for too long
it smells of stale milk and vinegar
who's arms are going to hold you
tonight?
the dreaded reflections of the past
or the potentially glorious possibility
of a better time at bat?
cheer up
sooner or later you're going to have to
put those bricks down
there's no better way to rebuild
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Copyright 2012 Taunting The Reaper
Published on Wednesday, February 29, 2012.
Filed under: "Philosophical" and
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
This is my tribute to women trying to get over a break up.Comments on "a lipstick-shade away from dead"
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A former member wrote:
brilliant. simply brilliant. truly a once in a lifetime piece.
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On Monday, March 12, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas
(293) wrote:
The first stanza was poetic gold. I dig the entire poem but that first stanza, yes!
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On Tuesday, March 6, 2012, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...great title, & the ladies would certainly agree that men are dogs...(some of us try to evolve from that state)...
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On Wednesday, February 29, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Liked the baseball analogy, and only two things never forget, one of them is the elephant, cheers and much enjoyed.