a lipstick-shade away from dead

By Taunting The Reaper

you're a lipstick-shade away from dead

in the final balance

you've spent too much time obsessing

over a pixel

and you're missing the bigger picture

 

men are tragically curious dogs

full of appetite

and bark

and once in a while clever

but rarely so loyal

so now what?

 

who are you carrying all those bricks for?

self pity is almost cute when you mean it

but when you mean it for too long

it smells of stale milk and vinegar

 

who's arms are going to hold you

tonight?

the dreaded reflections of the past

or the potentially glorious possibility

of a better time at bat?

 

cheer up

sooner or later you're going to have to

put those bricks down

there's no better way to rebuild

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Copyright 2012 Taunting The Reaper
Published on Wednesday, February 29, 2012.     Filed under: "Philosophical" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

This is my tribute to women trying to get over a break up.
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Comments on "a lipstick-shade away from dead"

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  • A former member wrote: brilliant. simply brilliant. truly a once in a lifetime piece.

  • Dreaming in Stanzas On Monday, March 12, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas (293)By person wrote:

    The first stanza was poetic gold. I dig the entire poem but that first stanza, yes!

  • FadedBlues On Tuesday, March 6, 2012, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...great title, & the ladies would certainly agree that men are dogs...(some of us try to evolve from that state)...

  • dwells On Wednesday, February 29, 2012, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Liked the baseball analogy, and only two things never forget, one of them is the elephant, cheers and much enjoyed.


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