The Dollhouse

By Mylissa

And when I fade.....

I will lace the air
with the smell and taste
of burnt plastic of a pretty doll.

~and my lingering emptiness
will stain the hearts of those who left me broken. ~

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Published on Friday, August 27, 2010. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "The Dollhouse"

On Monday, November 29, 2010, Leith Plunkett (237) wrote:

wow, beautiful
A former member wrote: wow. this is so fantastic.
A former member wrote: All dolls have hearts, and a broken heart can be a beautiful weapon. a smoldering, emphatic prophecy... well stated.
A former member wrote: Another Intriguing and Incredulous Artistic piece. I look forward to reading more of your work!
On Friday, August 27, 2010, Beautiful Incidental (38) wrote:

oh how i love the ones that sting !!!
On Friday, August 27, 2010, veingo (526) wrote:

Ah!!! When did you get back?? ^V^
On Friday, August 27, 2010, Alanarchy (1168) wrote:

"And when i fade..." Haunting way to start off. I like the way it makes the reader (me anyway) feel like their walking in on the caboose end of a train of thought, sort of catching it right at climax realization. Who broke you? I'll moiderize em. :) "A real heart-smasher" Yep. Lovely work, MyMy.
On Friday, August 27, 2010, carlosjackal (2788) wrote:

A real heart-smasher...So very well done and so good to have you back at DP x
On Friday, August 27, 2010, Mylissa (825) wrote:

thank you :}