still. born

By Narcissa



Dawn trickled down his chin
Like a rusty nail pried from an old barn
...could nothing hold him?
This man, once a child, not from my womb
But loved the same
  ...the stained cloth that dangled from his wrists
Told me he never knew...
and now...when angels are scarce
Feeding off breath of newborns
It is the ones who want to go that have to stay.









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Copyright 2010 Narcissa
Published on Tuesday, July 20, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

I haven't written in a while...but I needed to say something. ..
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  • Cassette On Tuesday, December 12, 2017, Cassette (1087)By person wrote:

    hmm.... this is brutal, narcissa. I do miss you around these parts.

  • A former member wrote: too brutal, hon... I hope you don't want to go... the world is better as long as you stay.... *bear hugs*

  • A former member wrote: This choked me. Honest and so very beautiful. Thank you. =)

  • A former member wrote: mmmm dolorous..... I hope you're not one of "the ones"..... too much loss here for words. Keep writing, hun. best wishes for better days, as you deserve.

  • The Dybbuk On Monday, August 13, 2012, The Dybbuk (895)By person wrote:

    what this guy said... all the best, always.

  • Malcholm Dark On Wednesday, July 21, 2010, Malcholm Dark (806)By person wrote:

    back with a bang... a strong emotional piece... write on

  • Narcissa On Saturday, July 24, 2010, Narcissa (391)By person wrote:

    ...if wishes were words Id be around more and Id writing something worth a damn...but I do thank you...

  • ALBATROSS On Tuesday, July 20, 2010, ALBATROSS (194)By person wrote:

    I've been wondering where you went! I'm so glad you wrote something and posted it. That last line is a piercing truth that bleeds the person you speak of. This was awesome.

  • Narcissa On Saturday, July 24, 2010, Narcissa (391)By person wrote:

    Thank you Jeff, It has been a long time...hope you are still writing...I guess to find that out I need to check out your page :) ...time on the other hand is very stingy at the moment...I do hope all is well w/you...

  • A former member wrote: and you have said plenty. plenty enough to make me cry. *smiles* you truely are beautiful, but you already knew that.

  • Narcissa On Saturday, July 24, 2010, Narcissa (391)By person wrote:

    miss you Mooney...sorry Im not around more...sure miss those old days...and thank you.


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