Leaving You

By Gray Vision

Say no more,
I've had my share,
Of all the lies,
You've told this year.
You mean so much to me
But it hurts to see,
All the hurtful things,
You've said and done
To me.
Why can't this work,
Why can't we be?
Our bodies are here,
But our minds are astray.
What good are we here,
If we just don’t care?
I really don’t know
But we're still here.
I mean,
Isn't that enough,
To show that we still care?
No stop right there,
This isn't fair,
So I'm leaving before
You cause any more
Harm,
My dear.

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Copyright 2010 Gray Vision
Published on Monday, April 26, 2010.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"

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  • Malice In Wonderland On Monday, July 22, 2013, Malice In Wonderland (976)By person wrote:

    I know how this goes....times change, and.complacency creeps on in....what may feel.painful can be a step towards what's right. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Deep. I can tell this took a lot out of you. Well done. =) Scholar

  • Gray Vision On Tuesday, January 11, 2011, Gray Vision (424)By person wrote:

    KS you changed your pic! This rose is wonderful but it doesn't do justice to your beautiful face. I hope all is well, lets talk again soon =)

  • A Life Without You On Monday, April 26, 2010, A Life Without You (146)By person wrote:

    excellent, written in a classical sense, nice write

  • Gray Vision On Tuesday, January 11, 2011, Gray Vision (424)By person wrote:

    Thank you very much my friend, you take care now =)

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